From bore to whore
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Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
6
Views:
12,214
Reviews:
15
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Alternative Ending
Okay so this is the better ending that everyone wanted...I would really like to say sorry to everyone about ending it like that and not coming back to it till now, first there was the whole changing thing with the site, and then i lost the site for awhile and only found it again right now...so i'll stop making excuses and post the better chapter. Oh and please look out for another story soon, it'll probably be around the same kind of thing as this one, just better written, a little longer, different plot...eh okay CHAPTER NOW!
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RECAP (Sense its been a really long time): “Just leave me alone!” Trapper yelled jumping up and running out of the class room. The teacher stood up at this moment and eyed John,
“What happened?” The teacher asked. John shook his head,
“If I knew I wouldn’t be asking her, now would I?” John said angrily, how dare she run away from him like that. The class’s attention turned to Danny who laughed.
“Don’t get fresh with me, boy. Get back in your seat.” The teacher said to John and then turned to Danny, “What’s so funny Mr. Secker?” Danny shook his head and went back to his nails. The teacher began the lesson and Kevin watched John stare at his notebook,
“Why is she afraid of me? She certainly wasn’t before.” John whispered to Kevin, who looked over at Danny, who was flirting with the girl next to him,
“Look, what I’m about to tell you, you have to promise not to kill the people involved.” John raised an eyebrow and slowly nodded, “At my party a month ago…Danny came up with this idea…” Kevin whispered the story to John who became redder and redder in the face as Kevin went on. At the end of it John stood up, upsetting his desk, and grabbed Danny by the collar of his shirt, and pinned him against the wall. Which was no easy feet seeing as Danny was three inches taller and a lot bigger then John,
“Where’s your pride man?” John hissed. The teacher stood up, but was held back by Kevin, “How dare you do that to her!” Danny laughed at John,
“I just wanted to get to her first, because you have been breaking all the good ones lately, so I wanted to get to her before you did.” Danny said simply still pinned against the wall. John growled,
“You are a fucking royal ass hole, dick head. I can’t believe you would stoop so low as to rape a girl.” John whispered. The class gasped and the girl that was previously flirting with Danny ran to the front of the class and sat there. Danny let out a maniac laugh,
“You where going to anyway.”
“No, I wasn’t. I always ask before, bastard, and if they so no I stop. You need to learn some self control. No wonder she’s afraid of men, it’s because of pigs like you that make guys like me look bad.” He said spitting in Danny’s face and storming out of the classroom.
Now on with the Alternative Ending:
John starred around the hallway. Where would she go? He turned towards the bathroom and raced to the door. When he entered, he could have sworn he heard movement, but when he looked he saw nothing. “Trapper?” He called just to make sure she wasn’t in there. When he heard no reply he screamed, “FUCK!” And punched the middle stall. He needed to find her, Danny was an idiot, he had known John really liked Trapper, and so did Kevin. How could Kevin let this happen?
He stormed out of the bathroom and turned to the office. Ignoring the calls of the secretary he went straight up to the intercom hoping Trapper was still in the school, “Trapper…”
Trapper looked up from her seat on the toilet and stared at the ceiling recognizing John’s voice on the speaker, “I swear I had no idea.” Trapper’s eyes went wide, John didn’t know? “Danny’s an ass-hole,” She could hear someone yelling at him over the speaker, “I need you Trapper-”
The secretary had managed to pull John away from the intercom and marched him into the principles office. Kevin was already sitting there his head down. “Hey.” Kevin said quietly,
“Don’t talk to me.” John said in a low growl. The principle motioned to the seat next to Kevin,
“Please sit, John.” He said.
“I’m fine standing.” John said glaring at the back of Kevin’s head,
“Sit.” The principle said forcefully. John sat down, but continued to glare at Kevin. “There is no reason to be angry at Kevin, he told me everything. The police are on their way to collect Danny.” John gripped the arm rests his knuckles turning white,
“Great, can I go now?” He had to find Trapper, he had to tell her the truth, and he had to fix everything. It was his fault, if he hadn’t have been drunk then none of this would have happened.
“No, you still beat Danny, and that is against school rules.” The principle said,
“WHAT! HE’S A RAPIEST! HE DESERVED IT!” John said standing up, tipping the chair over. The door creaked open and John went quiet. He turned and stopped. Trapper was standing at the door wringing her hands. Kevin kept looking down, and the principle stood up and walked over,
“Trapper, we need to get you to the hospital, or maybe a doctor.” He said guiding her out of the room,
“No.” She said shrugging him off of her, “I came here for John.” She said her voice suddenly strong. John was afraid to take a step, afraid she would run away again. The principle clicked his tongue,
“You are going whether you like it or not, you need professional help, to sort you out.” He said grabbing her wrist. She turned towards him,
“Let go of me.” She hissed. He backed up. When he let her go she looked at John,
“I’m sorry.” He whispered suddenly shy of Trapper. She walked over to him and lifted his face with her hand, “I’m sorry I let it happen to you. It’s all my fault.” John said looking into her eyes for the first time in months. She shook her head,
“It’s not your fault your friends are jerks.” She whispered lowering her eyes away from his stare. John put his hand against hers, that was still on his cheek,
“I need you Trapper. I have never kissed a person like when I kissed you.”
“It wasn’t just sex for you?” She whispered so only him and Kevin could hear. John shook his head. With that she put her lips against his. He was shocked and quickly wrapped his arms around her and pulled her closer,
“I missed you.” He whispered against her lips. She smiled her first real smile in a long time.
THE (other) END
So what do you guys think? Is this better? I think it is. Well thanks to everyone that reviewed, let me know what you think.
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RECAP (Sense its been a really long time): “Just leave me alone!” Trapper yelled jumping up and running out of the class room. The teacher stood up at this moment and eyed John,
“What happened?” The teacher asked. John shook his head,
“If I knew I wouldn’t be asking her, now would I?” John said angrily, how dare she run away from him like that. The class’s attention turned to Danny who laughed.
“Don’t get fresh with me, boy. Get back in your seat.” The teacher said to John and then turned to Danny, “What’s so funny Mr. Secker?” Danny shook his head and went back to his nails. The teacher began the lesson and Kevin watched John stare at his notebook,
“Why is she afraid of me? She certainly wasn’t before.” John whispered to Kevin, who looked over at Danny, who was flirting with the girl next to him,
“Look, what I’m about to tell you, you have to promise not to kill the people involved.” John raised an eyebrow and slowly nodded, “At my party a month ago…Danny came up with this idea…” Kevin whispered the story to John who became redder and redder in the face as Kevin went on. At the end of it John stood up, upsetting his desk, and grabbed Danny by the collar of his shirt, and pinned him against the wall. Which was no easy feet seeing as Danny was three inches taller and a lot bigger then John,
“Where’s your pride man?” John hissed. The teacher stood up, but was held back by Kevin, “How dare you do that to her!” Danny laughed at John,
“I just wanted to get to her first, because you have been breaking all the good ones lately, so I wanted to get to her before you did.” Danny said simply still pinned against the wall. John growled,
“You are a fucking royal ass hole, dick head. I can’t believe you would stoop so low as to rape a girl.” John whispered. The class gasped and the girl that was previously flirting with Danny ran to the front of the class and sat there. Danny let out a maniac laugh,
“You where going to anyway.”
“No, I wasn’t. I always ask before, bastard, and if they so no I stop. You need to learn some self control. No wonder she’s afraid of men, it’s because of pigs like you that make guys like me look bad.” He said spitting in Danny’s face and storming out of the classroom.
Now on with the Alternative Ending:
John starred around the hallway. Where would she go? He turned towards the bathroom and raced to the door. When he entered, he could have sworn he heard movement, but when he looked he saw nothing. “Trapper?” He called just to make sure she wasn’t in there. When he heard no reply he screamed, “FUCK!” And punched the middle stall. He needed to find her, Danny was an idiot, he had known John really liked Trapper, and so did Kevin. How could Kevin let this happen?
He stormed out of the bathroom and turned to the office. Ignoring the calls of the secretary he went straight up to the intercom hoping Trapper was still in the school, “Trapper…”
Trapper looked up from her seat on the toilet and stared at the ceiling recognizing John’s voice on the speaker, “I swear I had no idea.” Trapper’s eyes went wide, John didn’t know? “Danny’s an ass-hole,” She could hear someone yelling at him over the speaker, “I need you Trapper-”
The secretary had managed to pull John away from the intercom and marched him into the principles office. Kevin was already sitting there his head down. “Hey.” Kevin said quietly,
“Don’t talk to me.” John said in a low growl. The principle motioned to the seat next to Kevin,
“Please sit, John.” He said.
“I’m fine standing.” John said glaring at the back of Kevin’s head,
“Sit.” The principle said forcefully. John sat down, but continued to glare at Kevin. “There is no reason to be angry at Kevin, he told me everything. The police are on their way to collect Danny.” John gripped the arm rests his knuckles turning white,
“Great, can I go now?” He had to find Trapper, he had to tell her the truth, and he had to fix everything. It was his fault, if he hadn’t have been drunk then none of this would have happened.
“No, you still beat Danny, and that is against school rules.” The principle said,
“WHAT! HE’S A RAPIEST! HE DESERVED IT!” John said standing up, tipping the chair over. The door creaked open and John went quiet. He turned and stopped. Trapper was standing at the door wringing her hands. Kevin kept looking down, and the principle stood up and walked over,
“Trapper, we need to get you to the hospital, or maybe a doctor.” He said guiding her out of the room,
“No.” She said shrugging him off of her, “I came here for John.” She said her voice suddenly strong. John was afraid to take a step, afraid she would run away again. The principle clicked his tongue,
“You are going whether you like it or not, you need professional help, to sort you out.” He said grabbing her wrist. She turned towards him,
“Let go of me.” She hissed. He backed up. When he let her go she looked at John,
“I’m sorry.” He whispered suddenly shy of Trapper. She walked over to him and lifted his face with her hand, “I’m sorry I let it happen to you. It’s all my fault.” John said looking into her eyes for the first time in months. She shook her head,
“It’s not your fault your friends are jerks.” She whispered lowering her eyes away from his stare. John put his hand against hers, that was still on his cheek,
“I need you Trapper. I have never kissed a person like when I kissed you.”
“It wasn’t just sex for you?” She whispered so only him and Kevin could hear. John shook his head. With that she put her lips against his. He was shocked and quickly wrapped his arms around her and pulled her closer,
“I missed you.” He whispered against her lips. She smiled her first real smile in a long time.
THE (other) END
So what do you guys think? Is this better? I think it is. Well thanks to everyone that reviewed, let me know what you think.