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The Bus Ride

By: Sparticus
folder Erotica › General
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 6
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The completing of souls

Had Daniel been paying more attention to what was going on around him, he would have heard the front door open. Rebeka had stayed outside, not knowing what to do, but the sounds coming from the bedroom had spurred her inside. She made it to the bedroom door and walked in. Daniel had his back mostly to her and she saw the redhead on her knees working for all she was worth.

Rebeka instantly became wet as she watched the young girl work on her man. She couldn\'t help but walk up next to Daniel. He heard her breathing next to him and he opened his eyes and turned his head to see her. \"Rebe...\" he started as she delivered a hard smack against his face. In turn he reached up and pulled her hair, turning her face to meet his. Her pussy was set on fire just from his touch, even if it was a hard, cold touch. They looked at each other and saw the fire and desire in each other\'s eyes. At that moment they knew that they were both the dominants in the room and the only other person in the room, the young woman at Daniels feet, was to be the object of their \'attention\'.

The redhead had stopped what she was doing in confusion. In unison, they both looked down at her and Daniel spoke up. \"What are you looking at? Continue.\" She swallowed hard and went back to what she was doing, but now in her nervousness, she was not keeping up a good rhythm and started gagging often.

Rebeka heard the problems that the woman was having and looked down at her. \"If you don\'t do it right. I\'ll give you something else to do.\" A whimper escaped her mouth as she redoubled her efforts and slid Daniel back into her mouth. She was too worried about what was going on above her and the redhead could not get back into the spirit of things. A moan from Daniel was all Rebeka needed. She lifted on leg up onto a small stand next to the bed and hiked her dress up revealing her lack of underwear. \"If you can\'t suck a dick, maybe you can lick a slit. Come here.\"

The redhead shook her head, but crawled over to where Rebeka was standing and looked up at her. \"I don\'t-\"

Her outburst was cut short as Rebeka pulled back and backhanded the young woman across the face. \"Don\'t trifle with me,\" she said evenly as tears formed on the redhead\'s face. Leaning up, she tasted Rebeka, slowly at first, but then started to slide her tongue against her master\'s clit.

As she worked, the redhead began to get aroused and licked harder; surprised that she was enjoying it so much. Soon she felt herself get wetter. She really didn\'t want to do it at first, she simply stayed because she wanted to get touched the way the man on the bus touched her. She needed him against her and if this was what she had to go through to get it, then she\'d gladly do it.

For Daniel, the image of his woman getting licked on by someone else was almost unbearable. Fly open and member hanging out, he walked over to Rebeka and kissed her mightily; their tongues playing over each other\'s like a perfectly choreographed dance. They were on the same level now locked in the eternal struggle over who had the more powerful soul. For them, this was the power, both master and slave, dominant and submissive. Daniel pulled open Rebeka\'s shirt and massaged her breasts as Rebeka\'s breaths came quicker and shallower.

Finally after what seemed like an eternity, Daniel broke the kiss and reached down, taking the redhead\'s hair in his hand. He pulled her back off of his mistress and bent down to kiss the young woman, reveling in the perverse pleasure of tasting both her and Rebeka at the same time. He helped her up off the floor by the hair and a hand under the elbow.

The redhead stood there looking in amazement as the two people in the room began to kiss again, just when she thought she should leave, the man looked over at her. \"Strip,\" she heard. She became very self conscious, but excited at the same time. Slowly she unbuttoned her blouse and let it slide off her shoulders, revealing white skin with just a hint of freckles at her neck line, and a white lace bra. The blue pleated skirt dropped to the ground with the release of the button and zipper holding it up.

As she waited to see what would happen next, she felt her pussy flow with anticipation. Looking at the man and woman, she finally saw the woman look at her with a look of almost disgust. \"All the way.\"

Blushing heavily, the redhead reached back and unclipped the white bra, exposing a wonderful pair of milky white breasts with nipples the size of marbles which were sticking out, pleading with someone for attention. Next, she reached down and slowly pulled her panties down. She noticed in the middle was a spot of creamy goodness from her excitement. Her shoes were the last thing to come off, flicked to the side like they would never be worn again.

When she finished, she noticed that the man was licking on one of the brunette\'s large breasts and she seemed to be enjoying it. He caught her spying and walked over to her. With amazing quickness, he cupped her furry mound in his hand, the middle finger plunging in against her already soaked clit. A spasm rocked through her, as she found herself unable to breathe the pleasure taking control of everything. His hand was like a warm towel pressed against her and his fingers felt as if they were designed especially for her. A weakness in the knees caused her to sag down against his hand as she wrapped her arms around his arm like it was a life raft in the ocean. She felt her breath, hot and heavy against the blue fabric of his shirt covering his bicep as she moaned.

Her mind went wild with desire; she bit onto his arm gently feeling his finger move in small circles. She was drifting in a sea of sensualness when she heard a whisper in her ear. \"What is your name?\" came the question from the one giving her pleasure. The redhead didn\'t want to say, didn\'t want them to know. It was something that didn\'t seem right to share, something that should stay hidden inside her mind. She responded with silence, punctuated with soft moans. Her master pulled his finger away, staunching the flow of pleasure. Immediately her entire body begged for more and pleaded with her mind to relent.

\"If I tell you, will you touch me again?\" she pleaded. \"Yes,\" came the reply as the man barely touched her now swollen clit with the tip of his finger. A yelp burst from her mouth, \"Holly!\" As soon as she said it, he pressed his fingers against her again. Life felt complete as her excitement built. Loving every second of it, she removed one hand and grasped the man\'s member in her hand. She felt it pulse under her grip and she moved back and forth with it, hoping to return the gesture he gave her in some small way.

Rebeka watched during this, her own juices flowing from the control that her Daniel had on the girl. Slowly she undressed and then walked around until she was on the other side of the girl, facing Daniel. \"You picked well,\" she said to him, \"I approve.\" She ran her hands up and down Holly\'s back, feeling the skin almost each up and touch her fingers as she went. Satisfied that the girl was enjoying the touch, she slid her hands down until she too felt Holly\'s excitement, dripping down the inside of her thighs. Taking a finger full, Rebeka lubricated her little pucker with it, and then slid her finger inside. A cry escaped Holly\'s lips as she tried to pull away from Rebeka\'s finger, but a firm hand from Daniel kept her in her place. \"You will grow to enjoy it,\" Rebeka purred, soon Holly pressed herself down onto Rebeka\'s finger. \"See?\"


Daniel looked into Rebeka\'s eyes as they both worked on Holly. Just their stare was enough to make each other complete, but the shaking of their girl beneath them as she spasmed was almost as pleasurable. Knowing that the girl hand came hard, Daniel took her in his arms and led her over to the bed, laying her face down on it, her butt and legs dangling over the side. Holly lay there, gasping for breath and quivering every few seconds as aftershocks tore through her. Daniel walked to the dresser and started removing his clothes as he watched Rebeka lean over and press her weight into the young woman, keeping her warm after her ordeal.


Holly wasn\'t aware of the woman on top of her, she wasn\'t even sure that she was conscious at this point. She had never had an orgasm like that before; she knew she left teeth marks in the man\'s arm as he rode her through her orgasm. It was wonderfully sensuous and incredibly good. As her mind drifted back to reality, she felt the woman getting up off of her. She hadn\'t even known that she was there for the longest time. Her weight was replaced, however with the feeling of warm hands against her rear. The man was adjusting her position, pushing her legs down, thrusting her butt into the air more. Just when Holly was going to say something, she felt the head of his member press against her opening. Slowly she felt herself being filled and she pressed back against it until it stopped against her cervix. She let out a cry as he pulled back and forth slowly, ever so slowly. The pleasure was exquisite, she\'d do anything he wanted right now anything at all. That was put to the test as she felt the bed move. Looking up, the brunette had placed herself at the top of the bed and Holly could smell her just inches from her face. Not wanting to, but knowing what would happen if she disobeyed, Holly placed her tongue against the woman\'s clit and began licking on her.

She was getting into it and watched as the woman began to pant and rub on her breasts. The feeling from below was good too as the man slid himself in and out now, working up a good rhythm. Holly felt darkness crushing down on her as she convulsed again, a second orgasm rushing down over her. Recovering quickly, she continued to work on the woman before her when she saw the woman\'s eyes open.

Rebeka was enjoying the tongue thrashing she was getting from Holly. Though it was obvious that it was her first time, she was amazingly good at it. After he latest orgasm though, something changed. She wasn\'t as into it. Maybe she was spent, but Rebeka was betting that there was at least one more good orgasm left in her. Opening her eyes, she looked at Daniel who was staring at her while he fucked Holly. \"Maybe its time for a... change,\" she said with an evil expression on her face. Daniel could read her mind at this point and smiled. He withdrew his member; it was soaked through with Holly\'s juices, and raised it up a little.

He pressed the head of his dick against her tight little pucker. Holly let out a yelp and tried to squirm away, but he and Rebeka held her fast. As she slowly expanded to take the head in, Rebeka felt more than heard her scream as she held Holly\'s face tight against her puss. The vibration from her voice and the abject fear that Holly emanated pushed her over the edge and she screamed herself. As the fluid poured forth from her,
Holly took it in and swallowed it on instinct, grimacing as she did so. Daniel felt himself pop inside as she enveloped him. Slowly he pushed in, sliding his well lubricated penis deep inside of her. Slowly her cries of pain turned to moans of pleasure as she buried her head into the bed and bit on her finger to keep from yelling. Her ass was so tight Daniel had some troubles fitting himself inside for a while. Caring about his orgasm more than her pleasure though he fought through until he had it all in. A few thrusts were all that was needed as he felt her orgasm for the last time, a deep and penetrating orgasm that caused her body to come up off the bed and slam back down; reducing her to quivering mass beneath him. He kept up the onslaught until he could feel his own orgasm build. Soon he was pressing himself down into her as hard as he could, eliciting cries of pain and pleasure from Holly. He came hard and fast, pouring his seed deep into her. He bucked and pressed as she flexed her ass, milking every drop from her. Finally when he was finished he withdrew and collapsed next to her.


With everyone drained, Rebeka and Daniel slid Holly up onto the bed and they entangled themselves around her. Holly was awash in after glow as Daniel and Rebeka exchange knowing glances. The three of them lay there hugging each other until they fell into a deep sleep.

When she awoke, Holly found herself alone in the room. All signs of her experience from the night before had gone with the rising sun. Embarrassed and confused, she got out of bed and started to pull her clothes on. As she did, she noticed that there, lying inside one of the cups of her bra was a simple white card with a phone number on it. She bit her bottom lip as she slid the card into her purse, knowing that a night like that only came once in a lifetime, but a night similar to that could come a lot more often.


Rebeka and Daniel sat on an old park bench sitting on the roof of a tall apartment building in downtown. They gazed in the direction of the rising sun, just coming over the horizon. They were both awash in golden rays as they held hands and rested the sides of their heads together; knowing that they would be together always and that they could do anything, anyone, if they put their minds to it.


FIN
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