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Daddy Dearest

By: baka411
folder Original - Misc › -Slash - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 6
Views: 11,958
Reviews: 14
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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
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Author Note on 'Trials'


I understand if you're furious with me for deleting it, but hear me out.

I didn't like the way 'Trials' was going; it was supposed to have smut, but not so much smut that I lost touch with Mark and Todd. When I wrote 'Daddy Dearest', I wanted a story about two consenting adults in love, and exploring their limits to bettleaslease each other. When I started writing 'Trials', I dwelled deeper into smut. I want my wiritng to be better than some smut any thirteen-year-old could put out! I wanted to capture the passion, the devotion, and a lot of the physical aspects! (Duh. What's a good lemon without a bit of imagery?) I was failing in that respect, and so I destroyed it.

I have a beta person now, so we'll be rewriting 'Trials of Loyalty and Love' and putting out a better story! It'll hopefully be better than my first try, and definitely more flavorful than 'Daddy Dearest' was! All I ask is patience, even if I don't deserve it. ^-^
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