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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your idea for the story and the characters are cute. I do hope you finish the story. My only complaint is that the characters habits and conversations are a bit demented. What to grown men actually treat eachother like this? I can see how it could be kinky when Todd got spanked or something, but i think it goes a bit far. Im not being rude and i really enjoy your story but their coversations-how Todd can\'t say cuss words (and gets spanked for being \'bad\') and acts like a child constantly- are bit weird.
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just fin chap 3,SHIT i don't blame him either! I've would have done worse than curse! Also once when i was a child they had to tie me to the chair cauz i was kicking and scearming,The people outside in the waiting room understood my fear very well to! I'll review more when done,Lolz ^_^
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blink blink* You took 'Trials' down?! I thought it had just the right amount of smut (*cough* not enough *cough*) and all those thing you were going for. I wouldn't have stuck around if it weren't good! *pout* I say keep up what you're doing, although having a beta is always nice^^ I was really looking forward to their first time together *sigh*
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was great in any case. But, I will be looking forward to a different Trials of Loyalty and Love though. But still...I thought this one was going well. Anyway...
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I loved "Trials" but you're the author and if you're not pleased with it then it's your choice whether to rewrite it or not.
I just can't wait because I really love your work and I promise I'll do my best in giving feedback, because I'm not too good with it so I apologize for that.
*hugs*
I just can't wait because I really love your work and I promise I'll do my best in giving feedback, because I'm not too good with it so I apologize for that.
*hugs*
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea, but a little too perfect...
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Love this fic! I LOVE Mark and Todd! I I h I had someone like Mark to call daddy! ^______^
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ne, if you want more feedback, post it on fictionpress.com or deviantart or something. I could say it's childish to write for reviews but... I'm the same way! Anyway, you're doing an excellent job on this, so please continue^^
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i hope u keep it up and i cant wait till the next chapter!! love lots heathbar
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yep, this is definitely kinky and I loves it^^ I like the way it's written and like the characters, so I have nothing to complain about other than... get to the lemon already! XD No really, it's good stuff, more soon.