Forbidden Pleasures
folder
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
4
Views:
19,397
Reviews:
14
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
4
Views:
19,397
Reviews:
14
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Authors notes
Ok first of all if you're going to flame me your wasting your time. There is nothing wrong with an active imagination. What is wrong is if a person does what they imagine. I've been told this by my psychologist years ago. Also what's sicker; the fact that i wrote the story, or the fact that your reading it? Secondly most children of these age groups are normally virgins - unless someone has already hurt them. I know a person who lost their verginity at 6 with a 5 year old girl. they found dirty magazines and decided to explore.
This is just a story. If i actually was told about something like this, as a survivor of sexual abuse, i'd have to hunt down the person and torture them to death. Also for you flamers somthing to think about; my story has had over 2000 hits in less than a week. out of all of those hits, there are only 5 reviews flaming me! How bad is that? People enjoy reading sexual fiction. That is what this story is - fiction. It's not real and i would never do these acts as they are sick. However even with the warnings you guys are the ones who chose to read them. If you choose to read the story don't flame me, be mad at yourself for reading. Even more the ages of the cast in ch 1 should give fair warning as well. I will update the story soon. From now on positive reviews only please. What do you like about the story? What can i improve on? What dont you like? How can it be fixed without ruining the plot? Input is encouraged. Especially productive critisism.
Also for you flamers; I was that little girl being hurt! It does happen weather you like it or not. Mind you i was slightly older than 4, but still. Since most of my experiances are blocked away from severe PSTD i do not remember them but the emotions are there. There were warnings before you even clicked the story title. Also i was advised by a psychologist who monitors me that writing such a story involving children getting hurt might help me deal with what's happened to me.
Another thing; I AM A PARENT! I would never even think of touching my child. You guys are even sick for considering such a though! My son was molested by a state founded daycare teacher of all people. I put a bad hurting on that person, who last i knew was still in jail. You will all like the end though. There will be poetic justice for the children. I guess i'll include warnings with each chapter from now on for those of you too stupid to read summaries! I will post possibly another chapter tomorrow night. Then the next chapter will take a while as my mother will be in town. Lol, need i say more?
This is just a story. If i actually was told about something like this, as a survivor of sexual abuse, i'd have to hunt down the person and torture them to death. Also for you flamers somthing to think about; my story has had over 2000 hits in less than a week. out of all of those hits, there are only 5 reviews flaming me! How bad is that? People enjoy reading sexual fiction. That is what this story is - fiction. It's not real and i would never do these acts as they are sick. However even with the warnings you guys are the ones who chose to read them. If you choose to read the story don't flame me, be mad at yourself for reading. Even more the ages of the cast in ch 1 should give fair warning as well. I will update the story soon. From now on positive reviews only please. What do you like about the story? What can i improve on? What dont you like? How can it be fixed without ruining the plot? Input is encouraged. Especially productive critisism.
Also for you flamers; I was that little girl being hurt! It does happen weather you like it or not. Mind you i was slightly older than 4, but still. Since most of my experiances are blocked away from severe PSTD i do not remember them but the emotions are there. There were warnings before you even clicked the story title. Also i was advised by a psychologist who monitors me that writing such a story involving children getting hurt might help me deal with what's happened to me.
Another thing; I AM A PARENT! I would never even think of touching my child. You guys are even sick for considering such a though! My son was molested by a state founded daycare teacher of all people. I put a bad hurting on that person, who last i knew was still in jail. You will all like the end though. There will be poetic justice for the children. I guess i'll include warnings with each chapter from now on for those of you too stupid to read summaries! I will post possibly another chapter tomorrow night. Then the next chapter will take a while as my mother will be in town. Lol, need i say more?