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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
greet job on the plot somewhat believable very nice story
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Check this site out:www.futahentai.com/?id=35584.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god thanks for scarring me for life dickhead
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad i liked the fact that you explained yourself in the end -.- any one that flames after that is just doing it for the publicity
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love how you didn't let Flames bring you down
the story is interesting with a lot of details and I don't know that much you can improve on.
I like it not sure why
besides its just a story it isn't like you do that to your son
the story is interesting with a lot of details and I don't know that much you can improve on.
I like it not sure why
besides its just a story it isn't like you do that to your son
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Could you do something about the huge wall of text? It makes it hard to read.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Forget what the flamers say. There just stupid people who read these kinds of stories to flame, your right there is a warning posted before you click so flamers need to get lost. You can tell from reading that this is an imaginary story and for anyone who asks doing this is wrong to children but writing about it is not as strange as it appears. Besides i think this story is good. I for one want you to update again.
I'm also sorry about your son and yourself, but i suffered from a simlar situation from my own father, but he's in jail too. And no i don't find this story offensive because people do do this to their children. I should know i was one too.
Update soon! I'll be waiting.
I'm also sorry about your son and yourself, but i suffered from a simlar situation from my own father, but he's in jail too. And no i don't find this story offensive because people do do this to their children. I should know i was one too.
Update soon! I'll be waiting.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like where this story is going.See if you can make the chapters longer. btw I agree with your authors note
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cool, i agree with you, this is fiction. People shouldn't get so upset about it. Anyways i luv the story line, and I'm glad you're an awesome writer.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The author is perfectly within legal limits to write this, fully protected under the First Amendment (Freedom of Speech, for those who are too stupid to know). And as long as she doesn't go out and do this, it's perfectly legal for her to write about it. If you are offended, you have a problem. You're one of those people who files the lawsuit against McDonald's because you spilled coffee on yourself. Put simply, "You no like, you no read."
Besides all that, it's an adult site. You log on to this website knowing that there's stuff on here you're not gonna agree with. If you are offended, you shouldn't have read it in the first place. It says in the summary: "Anal,Angst,BDSM,Bi,Bond,D/s,F/M/M,FemDom,Fet,HJ,Humil,Inc,Language,Lemon,M/F,M/F/F,MaleDom,Minor,N/C,OC,Oral,Preg,SI,Slave,SoloF,SoloM,Spank,Tort,Toys,TransG,UST,Violence,WIP,Yaoi,Yuri." I don't agree with all of this (particularly the TransG and Yaoi), but I'm still gonna read it, and I eagerly await the next chapter.
Besides all that, it's an adult site. You log on to this website knowing that there's stuff on here you're not gonna agree with. If you are offended, you shouldn't have read it in the first place. It says in the summary: "Anal,Angst,BDSM,Bi,Bond,D/s,F/M/M,FemDom,Fet,HJ,Humil,Inc,Language,Lemon,M/F,M/F/F,MaleDom,Minor,N/C,OC,Oral,Preg,SI,Slave,SoloF,SoloM,Spank,Tort,Toys,TransG,UST,Violence,WIP,Yaoi,Yuri." I don't agree with all of this (particularly the TransG and Yaoi), but I'm still gonna read it, and I eagerly await the next chapter.