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Adult +
Chapters:
3
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2,647
Reviews:
17
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Chapter 2
A/N: Hey look I got this up pretty quick! I'm kinda proud of that! =] And I've already started on chapter 3
but I've been thinking of just leaving it off here. I'm not real sure so tell me what you think, please!
Alright, so, as was said before, I’m writing this to develop my sex scene skills, my SSS if you will (ha, that’s funny…..well it is to me anyway). Err, right, well here it is! Heh, I hope that you like it…or can at least understand what’s going on….yeah so PLEASE leave a review so that I know how I did. If you find something wrong or think it doesn’t flow right, tell me! And I edited it myself but I’m not perfect so if you see any grammar or spelling mistakes let me know! (Review Reply at the end)
So, with out further ado, on to the sex! (Ha that’s really fun to say)
Chapter 2
Somehow or another we made it back to my apartment and as soon as I stepped through the door he followed slamming it shut. “Strip.”
I was having a hard time thinking and it took a minute for my brain to process what he had said. “Right here? Don’t you-”
“I said strip.” His voice was hard and the look on his face said he meant business.
Nodding, I hurriedly jerked my shirt over my head, but before I could even get it off he had his hands on my chest. I froze as his hand grazed my nipple, sending shivers up my spine. I couldn’t see it happening and it make the feeling more intense. His voice was whisper soft, “Did I say you could stop?”
“Uh, n-no.”
His grazing hand suddenly twisted my nipple, sending shivers of pain and pleasure through me. “No, sir.”
“Right. No, s-sir.” My arms were still
above my head, entangled in my shirt.
My nipple was still being twisted and he grabbed the other giving it the same torture saying, “Then continue.”
I nodded even though he couldn’t see, throwing the shirt to the side. My angel turned devil released my nipples, removing his hands completely from my body. In a matter of seconds I was standing nude in my living room with only the street lamps to brighten the place. I couldn’t see much but I felt him move as he walked around examining my body. Shivers from standing naked and from the feel of his stare raked my body.
His voice was whisper soft as he asked,
“Are you cold?”
“No.” There was a short pause and then a hand came down on my bare ass. I gasped at the ripple effect that simple slap had. It stung at first, and then began to fade into a burn that made my already saluting cock stand up even more. My hand made its way to the burning cheek to rub it only to be slapped away.
“What did you say?”
“Uh, no, sir.”
He made a small humming noise. A single finger ran up and down my spine, and then slowly began to trace circles and odd shapes, making me shiver and shake even more. That wondering finger found its way down to my ass, slowly tracing the crease, but apply no pressure. I whimpered, pushing backwards. I got another slap, this time on the opposite cheek.
“To the bedroom. Now.” My ass was stinging and that finger hadn’t stopped and he wanted me to move from all that? I opened my mouth the say something, but before I could a hand came down on my ass again. This time it was harder and I had to take a step forward. Holy fucking shit that felt good. “Did you hear what I said?” I said nothing just nodded and gingerly made my way down the hall to the bedroom, my ass stinging a little with each step.
Opening the door I moved directly for the bed, but stopped because he hadn’t said to do that and he seemed to be in charge. No, wait, he didn’t seem to be, he was in charge. So turning away from the bed I looked to the doorway and found that he was naked except for a pair of black boxers that were straining. The room had more light to allow into it, so I saw when he gave a huge smile and how it made his whole face light up. Not to mention the fact that it make my knees go weak. “You’re a good boy…” he trailed off as a peculiar smile came to his face. “I don’t even know your name.”
“Lang.” That smile disappeared and was replaced by a scowl. “Oh, uh, L-Lang, sir.”
That huge smile was back and he walked to me, reaching a hand out and tracing my jaw. “You’re a good boy, Lang, but you still messed up.” That hand on my jaw slowly wandered down exploring my neck, my collarbone, and then onto my chest. He did the same thing as he had earlier; taking a single finger and making small circles, slowly, and it made me crave more. That finger was making its way south and I whimpered every time it would almost touch my dick and then stopped only to move back up. My fingers twitched with the need to grab something, my breath was coming in harsh gasps, my brain was in a fog and it made it really hard to thinking about anything but the need to cum. Shit. I’ve only just met the guy and to boot he’s barely touched me and already he’s got me withering with desire. Literally, withering!
All thoughts were cut off as he stopped that finger and just grabbed my dick. Holy fuck and all that’s pink that felt good. But he did nothing else. We stood there me gasping and him just holding my dick. It was pure torture. My hips twitched wanting to move, to thrust, to get some sort of friction, anything, but this stillness.
Groaning I leaned my head forward, resting it on his blond hair and groaned out, “Please! Will you please move or something? Please…” My voice trailed off and, then hitched as he licked up my neck to my ear. His breath was hot and wet, sending even more shivers up my spine. Holy Shit, ears are my weakness, please, don’t do anything or I think I might-
He bit it. Holy flying cows. My knees actually gave out and I leaned heavily against him. He chuckled and let go of my ear, licking it before blowing gently. My hands came up to grip his shoulders as my weight left my legs completely. “Do you like to have your ears bitten?” He whispered. Oh, fuck. “I bet I know something you’d like even more.” He licked the shell and made his way to just below biting and sucking. Fuck a squirrel that was good! I moaned loudly as he continued to bite and suck, marking me. Stopping he went back to my ear and whispered, “I bet you’d like it even more if I took this,” the hand holding my cock gave a small twist making me moan and whimper when he said this, “hard,” another bit to my ear, “aching,” a gentle lick to sooth the bit, “ cock,” he put a subtle emphases on that word, “into my mouth and let you fuck my mouth so hard I’m gasping and can hardly take a breath.” Those images make me groan and give a small thrust of my hips. He chuckles and then gave me a gentle shove so I landed on my bed, bouncing slightly. Instantly I missed his heat and wanted it back.
He climbs over me on all fours and positions himself so that nothing touches. God fucked bastard, will you stop teasing me already?! Apparently he can read minds because he gives another chuckle and goes back to whispering in my ear. “I bet you’d like it even more if I put my,” he lowered his hips the black silk of his boxers barely touching my leaking dick, “hard,” he lowered his whole self onto me causing me to gasp, “aching,” he thrust his hips rubbing us together, “cock inside you. You’re ass tight as a vice gripping me, milking me for my seed. I bet you’d be begging me to move and I’d draw out slowly, oh so slowly that you’d feel my entire length, every inch. You’d love it even more as I moved just as slowly in stretching you and filling you. You’d sob and clutch at me, wanting more; wanting it harder and faster, but I’d keep it slow.” I’m panting and trying to move do exactly as he’s describing but he won’t let me. I’m trapped under him. “Then when you’re moaning and begging, gasping and sobbing with pleasure I’d thrust into you deep and hard. I’d ride your ass, your face smothered in the sheets, barely able to breath.”
“Yes, yes! Please, give it to me! Please!” I’m actually sobbing with need now and he still hasn’t really touched me! I can feel that familiar warmth building in my lower stomach. “Zeus, please, just fuck me already!”
He chuckled, the bastard. His body’s still flush against mine as he pulls and looks into my eyes. “My names not Zeus, its Kasper.”
“Right. Kasper. I’ll remember that so I can scream it later, so will you hurry up? Pretty please?” I was whining at this point and I didn’t give a flying fuck.
Kasper smiled and asked, “Lube?”
“Bed stand.” He nodded leaving me to grab it. Next thing I know I’m turned over and there’s a lubed finger probing my back door. Oh sweet flying monkeys, finally! It’s been too long since the last time anyone’s been back there. I’m doing that withering thing again; cock rubbing against the sheets, fingers in my ass and it is heaven. He adds a second finger, gently spreading me. Where’s the commanding attitude from before? I don’t want gentle! “Fuck, please!” Shit, tell me he understood that. He did because his fingers disappear and I feel the tip of his cock at my entrance. I really hope he’s wearing a con-
He thrusts forward, entering all at once. If there was any pain it’s all obscured by the pleasure that clouds my mind at finally being full. He doesn’t stop to let me adjust, just keeps thrusting, literally plowing into me. A few thrust in he finds my prostate making me see stars of black and white, and then he keeps hitting it over and over. I can’t breathe from the intensity, my hands clenching and unclenching the sheets. He slaps my ass a few times in sync with his thrust, the burn and sting of each hit bringing me closer to my orgasm. His hands are on my hips controlling, he’s grabbing them so hard I know there will be bruises, but I could care less. He leans over and bits my ear, ah, fuck yes, its right there, I can feel it, I’m gonna-
“Cum for me Lang.”
That softly spoken command was the end for me and I came screaming, “Kasper!” I almost blacked out or maybe I did because the next thing that I hear is Kasper gasping my name and then falling on top of me. We’re both panting, chests heaving and trying to get some form of control back over our bodies. Sleep is slowly creeping up on me and I barely notice as Kasper pulls out and maneuvers us so that we can lie under the blankets. I know that I’m going to throw a bitch fit in the morning for the mess but at this moment, with my body feeling nothing but bliss and Kasper’s body curled up next to me, the world could end and I wouldn’t care.
End Chapter 2
Well? What did you think? Was it bad? Or Okay? Or was it horrible? Or wonderful? Please let me know in a review!
Review Reply: Thank you so much to those that reviewed it made me smile and write just a little bit faster knowing that people were actually enjoying and looking forward to more! =D
PuddlesIsHer77 – I’m so happy that you like this and believe me when I say that I’m gonna write more! =] I hope you enjoyed this chapter!
KatF0 – Yay! You find it interesting; I was so worried that people wouldn’t like the idea. =D Taller bottoms are amazing! Lol
Emeraldawn – I loved your review! I nearly spit out my drink when I read it! And Look! I did post more!
mizzlizdiz – Holy flap jacks! You reviewed my story!! I love your stories! Hahaha and I hadn’t planned on putting that dirty talk in there (well at least I think that’s dirty talk….maybe…) but after I read your review I thought I’d put some in there for you since you were so excited about it. =P I’m so happy that you like Lang! He’s a rather odd character but he makes me smile and laugh! =] And yes we now know names although you didn’t know Kasper’s until nearly the end.
but I've been thinking of just leaving it off here. I'm not real sure so tell me what you think, please!
Alright, so, as was said before, I’m writing this to develop my sex scene skills, my SSS if you will (ha, that’s funny…..well it is to me anyway). Err, right, well here it is! Heh, I hope that you like it…or can at least understand what’s going on….yeah so PLEASE leave a review so that I know how I did. If you find something wrong or think it doesn’t flow right, tell me! And I edited it myself but I’m not perfect so if you see any grammar or spelling mistakes let me know! (Review Reply at the end)
So, with out further ado, on to the sex! (Ha that’s really fun to say)
Chapter 2
Somehow or another we made it back to my apartment and as soon as I stepped through the door he followed slamming it shut. “Strip.”
I was having a hard time thinking and it took a minute for my brain to process what he had said. “Right here? Don’t you-”
“I said strip.” His voice was hard and the look on his face said he meant business.
Nodding, I hurriedly jerked my shirt over my head, but before I could even get it off he had his hands on my chest. I froze as his hand grazed my nipple, sending shivers up my spine. I couldn’t see it happening and it make the feeling more intense. His voice was whisper soft, “Did I say you could stop?”
“Uh, n-no.”
His grazing hand suddenly twisted my nipple, sending shivers of pain and pleasure through me. “No, sir.”
“Right. No, s-sir.” My arms were still
above my head, entangled in my shirt.
My nipple was still being twisted and he grabbed the other giving it the same torture saying, “Then continue.”
I nodded even though he couldn’t see, throwing the shirt to the side. My angel turned devil released my nipples, removing his hands completely from my body. In a matter of seconds I was standing nude in my living room with only the street lamps to brighten the place. I couldn’t see much but I felt him move as he walked around examining my body. Shivers from standing naked and from the feel of his stare raked my body.
His voice was whisper soft as he asked,
“Are you cold?”
“No.” There was a short pause and then a hand came down on my bare ass. I gasped at the ripple effect that simple slap had. It stung at first, and then began to fade into a burn that made my already saluting cock stand up even more. My hand made its way to the burning cheek to rub it only to be slapped away.
“What did you say?”
“Uh, no, sir.”
He made a small humming noise. A single finger ran up and down my spine, and then slowly began to trace circles and odd shapes, making me shiver and shake even more. That wondering finger found its way down to my ass, slowly tracing the crease, but apply no pressure. I whimpered, pushing backwards. I got another slap, this time on the opposite cheek.
“To the bedroom. Now.” My ass was stinging and that finger hadn’t stopped and he wanted me to move from all that? I opened my mouth the say something, but before I could a hand came down on my ass again. This time it was harder and I had to take a step forward. Holy fucking shit that felt good. “Did you hear what I said?” I said nothing just nodded and gingerly made my way down the hall to the bedroom, my ass stinging a little with each step.
Opening the door I moved directly for the bed, but stopped because he hadn’t said to do that and he seemed to be in charge. No, wait, he didn’t seem to be, he was in charge. So turning away from the bed I looked to the doorway and found that he was naked except for a pair of black boxers that were straining. The room had more light to allow into it, so I saw when he gave a huge smile and how it made his whole face light up. Not to mention the fact that it make my knees go weak. “You’re a good boy…” he trailed off as a peculiar smile came to his face. “I don’t even know your name.”
“Lang.” That smile disappeared and was replaced by a scowl. “Oh, uh, L-Lang, sir.”
That huge smile was back and he walked to me, reaching a hand out and tracing my jaw. “You’re a good boy, Lang, but you still messed up.” That hand on my jaw slowly wandered down exploring my neck, my collarbone, and then onto my chest. He did the same thing as he had earlier; taking a single finger and making small circles, slowly, and it made me crave more. That finger was making its way south and I whimpered every time it would almost touch my dick and then stopped only to move back up. My fingers twitched with the need to grab something, my breath was coming in harsh gasps, my brain was in a fog and it made it really hard to thinking about anything but the need to cum. Shit. I’ve only just met the guy and to boot he’s barely touched me and already he’s got me withering with desire. Literally, withering!
All thoughts were cut off as he stopped that finger and just grabbed my dick. Holy fuck and all that’s pink that felt good. But he did nothing else. We stood there me gasping and him just holding my dick. It was pure torture. My hips twitched wanting to move, to thrust, to get some sort of friction, anything, but this stillness.
Groaning I leaned my head forward, resting it on his blond hair and groaned out, “Please! Will you please move or something? Please…” My voice trailed off and, then hitched as he licked up my neck to my ear. His breath was hot and wet, sending even more shivers up my spine. Holy Shit, ears are my weakness, please, don’t do anything or I think I might-
He bit it. Holy flying cows. My knees actually gave out and I leaned heavily against him. He chuckled and let go of my ear, licking it before blowing gently. My hands came up to grip his shoulders as my weight left my legs completely. “Do you like to have your ears bitten?” He whispered. Oh, fuck. “I bet I know something you’d like even more.” He licked the shell and made his way to just below biting and sucking. Fuck a squirrel that was good! I moaned loudly as he continued to bite and suck, marking me. Stopping he went back to my ear and whispered, “I bet you’d like it even more if I took this,” the hand holding my cock gave a small twist making me moan and whimper when he said this, “hard,” another bit to my ear, “aching,” a gentle lick to sooth the bit, “ cock,” he put a subtle emphases on that word, “into my mouth and let you fuck my mouth so hard I’m gasping and can hardly take a breath.” Those images make me groan and give a small thrust of my hips. He chuckles and then gave me a gentle shove so I landed on my bed, bouncing slightly. Instantly I missed his heat and wanted it back.
He climbs over me on all fours and positions himself so that nothing touches. God fucked bastard, will you stop teasing me already?! Apparently he can read minds because he gives another chuckle and goes back to whispering in my ear. “I bet you’d like it even more if I put my,” he lowered his hips the black silk of his boxers barely touching my leaking dick, “hard,” he lowered his whole self onto me causing me to gasp, “aching,” he thrust his hips rubbing us together, “cock inside you. You’re ass tight as a vice gripping me, milking me for my seed. I bet you’d be begging me to move and I’d draw out slowly, oh so slowly that you’d feel my entire length, every inch. You’d love it even more as I moved just as slowly in stretching you and filling you. You’d sob and clutch at me, wanting more; wanting it harder and faster, but I’d keep it slow.” I’m panting and trying to move do exactly as he’s describing but he won’t let me. I’m trapped under him. “Then when you’re moaning and begging, gasping and sobbing with pleasure I’d thrust into you deep and hard. I’d ride your ass, your face smothered in the sheets, barely able to breath.”
“Yes, yes! Please, give it to me! Please!” I’m actually sobbing with need now and he still hasn’t really touched me! I can feel that familiar warmth building in my lower stomach. “Zeus, please, just fuck me already!”
He chuckled, the bastard. His body’s still flush against mine as he pulls and looks into my eyes. “My names not Zeus, its Kasper.”
“Right. Kasper. I’ll remember that so I can scream it later, so will you hurry up? Pretty please?” I was whining at this point and I didn’t give a flying fuck.
Kasper smiled and asked, “Lube?”
“Bed stand.” He nodded leaving me to grab it. Next thing I know I’m turned over and there’s a lubed finger probing my back door. Oh sweet flying monkeys, finally! It’s been too long since the last time anyone’s been back there. I’m doing that withering thing again; cock rubbing against the sheets, fingers in my ass and it is heaven. He adds a second finger, gently spreading me. Where’s the commanding attitude from before? I don’t want gentle! “Fuck, please!” Shit, tell me he understood that. He did because his fingers disappear and I feel the tip of his cock at my entrance. I really hope he’s wearing a con-
He thrusts forward, entering all at once. If there was any pain it’s all obscured by the pleasure that clouds my mind at finally being full. He doesn’t stop to let me adjust, just keeps thrusting, literally plowing into me. A few thrust in he finds my prostate making me see stars of black and white, and then he keeps hitting it over and over. I can’t breathe from the intensity, my hands clenching and unclenching the sheets. He slaps my ass a few times in sync with his thrust, the burn and sting of each hit bringing me closer to my orgasm. His hands are on my hips controlling, he’s grabbing them so hard I know there will be bruises, but I could care less. He leans over and bits my ear, ah, fuck yes, its right there, I can feel it, I’m gonna-
“Cum for me Lang.”
That softly spoken command was the end for me and I came screaming, “Kasper!” I almost blacked out or maybe I did because the next thing that I hear is Kasper gasping my name and then falling on top of me. We’re both panting, chests heaving and trying to get some form of control back over our bodies. Sleep is slowly creeping up on me and I barely notice as Kasper pulls out and maneuvers us so that we can lie under the blankets. I know that I’m going to throw a bitch fit in the morning for the mess but at this moment, with my body feeling nothing but bliss and Kasper’s body curled up next to me, the world could end and I wouldn’t care.
End Chapter 2
Well? What did you think? Was it bad? Or Okay? Or was it horrible? Or wonderful? Please let me know in a review!
Review Reply: Thank you so much to those that reviewed it made me smile and write just a little bit faster knowing that people were actually enjoying and looking forward to more! =D
PuddlesIsHer77 – I’m so happy that you like this and believe me when I say that I’m gonna write more! =] I hope you enjoyed this chapter!
KatF0 – Yay! You find it interesting; I was so worried that people wouldn’t like the idea. =D Taller bottoms are amazing! Lol
Emeraldawn – I loved your review! I nearly spit out my drink when I read it! And Look! I did post more!
mizzlizdiz – Holy flap jacks! You reviewed my story!! I love your stories! Hahaha and I hadn’t planned on putting that dirty talk in there (well at least I think that’s dirty talk….maybe…) but after I read your review I thought I’d put some in there for you since you were so excited about it. =P I’m so happy that you like Lang! He’s a rather odd character but he makes me smile and laugh! =] And yes we now know names although you didn’t know Kasper’s until nearly the end.