Just the Right Time
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Category:
Original - Misc › -Slash - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
4
Views:
3,218
Reviews:
9
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Chapter 2. Tyler's Discovery and Esperanza's new Room-mate
Title: Just the Right Time
Starry_Skies: Well Hello hello again. I would like to say thank you to the people that reviwed and for reviewing I give another Chapter.
Tyler: *mumbles* stop reviewing.
Starry_Skies: *Turns to Tyler* Is there a problem, because I can always stick you with Jin, I\'m sure she\'ll be nice to you.
Tyler: *Goes wide eyed* NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.......
Starry_Skies: Man, I say my sister\'s name and he freaks. I guess he\'ll shut up for awhile, but...Tyler dear could you do the desclaimer?
Tyler: Fine...Starry_Skies owns the plot, the characters, and anything else that is thrown in here. If any one steals she will track them down and personally give them to her sister Jin, who is a mean little bugger and should go to HELL!. *WHACK* I mean she\'s really nice and we should all respect her. Bye bye.
Starry_Skies: Before I put the next chapter up I would like to pay tribute to all the people who reviewed, so here were the reviewers.
1. Dadella 2004-12-13 id # 2035104383 eep
CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!!
You can\'t just leave it at that!!!!
I really want to know what he was told!
and you\'ve done a good job, setting up the character developement so far... That\'s always a peeve of mine, when the characters are poorly done, but you\'ve managed to pass THAT little test...
^_^
SS: Thank you very much Dadella for your ethusiastic Review.
2.Rombach 2004-12-13 id # 2035104406 no fair! Cliffies suck!!
I want to see more!!
SS:Again, thank you very much Rombach, and no cliffies don\'t suck...they make the story more interesting, but there will be no cliffie in chapter 2.
3.Anime_Chik 2004-12-13 id # 2035104531 That was great, but...I no people in my school by those names, you wouldn\'t by any chance go to a school by those names would you...well I won\'t critisize so please please please please please, make another chappy soon and I promise that I will be a greeat reviewer for you. Thank you.
SS: Anime_Chik I did not take this from a school setting or my school, I do no know any by this name except Esperanza and for anyone who wants to know, that is me. My name is Esperanza and that\'s all I\'m tellin you...so as I say this in the most polite way...READ THE STORY!!!!!!!!
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Chapter 2. Tyler\'s Discovery and Esperanza\'s new Room-mate
Prevous Chapter
Tyler ran out of school and ran all the way to his house, Esperanza was right behind him. She didn\'t know what happened, but she was about to find out...
***********************************************************************
Tyler was down on the ground sobbing when Esperanza finally cuaght up to Tyler. When she looked over to Tyler\'s house it was in flames and the firefighters were trying their best to put the flames out. She knelt down next to Tyler as Tyler clung to her for support. His things were in there and so were his family, who were still asleep, because they all had the flu. Yes, his parents and little sister died along with all his things and memorys in the house.
Esperanza couldn\'t take it, she cot up and ran over to a firefighter to see if anyone...anyone at all survived. The firefighter gave her a strange look. \"Um, girl, there\'s no one home.\" He gave her another strange look then went to check out another firefighter. Ezperanza shook her head in disbelieve and ran over to Tyler.
\"Tyler...Tyler,\" she said pushing the poor boy. Tyler looked up at her, his eyes watering.
\"Wh-what is it, E-Esperanza, I\'m not in t-the m-mood for one of y-your jokes.\" Tyler looked away little sobbing noise\'s coming from him.
Ezperanza pulled him up and looked him in the eye. \"This ain\'t no joke, Love. I talked to a Firefighter and when I asked him if there were any survivors he said that no one was home, so think about. No one is home so that makes that only your house was burn\'t down and not your family.\" Tyler\'s face shone when she said that and he hugged her and yelled thank god to everyone that he went past.
A firefighter stopped Tyler and asked if he was someone that lived in the house, when Tyler nodded the firefighter took him over to a firefighter truck and set him down. \"Boy I need to tell you somtin...\" Esperanza came over to sit next to Tyler and the Firefighter looked up. \"Excuse me Miss, do you live here too.\"
\"No I don\'t, but this is my best friend and he is like a brother to me, so please don\'t tell em to go.\" When the firefighter looked at Tyler for his openion he simply shook his head and waited for the response of the firefighter.
\"Well, there were people in the house, three to be excact and...\" Tyler\'s eyes welled up with fresh tears and he cried. Esperanza took Tyler into her arms and started to rock back and forth, trying to calm the estatic boy.
She looked up,\"Is there anything else that you want tot tell us so we can go.\" She had a look of pure fury in her eyes and she was ery pissed. First off they shouldn\'t have a fucking firefighter who doesn\'t know the facts and second why the hell did they not look inside to find any person in the fucking house.
The firefighter nodded his head. \"Well this might be obvious but all three people died and, would you guys like to no how the fire started.\" Esperanza wispered into Tyler\'s ear and he shook his head. She looked at the firefighter and she shook her head for Tyler\'s response. \"Ok, and well is there anywhere, boy that you could live, Your house is unlivable to anyone and we don\'t give the will\'s stuff out until your 18.\"
Tyler couldn\'t believe any of this. He went into totla shock and Esperanza saw it. She stepped in like an older sister would and said,\"I have a house where he can live at, I also have cloths, so if you excuse me, I think I will take him there. And with that she picked up Tyler and she started to walk off to her house.
^^^^^^
Esperanza had put Tyler into her bed for awhile and sat on her couch. She had her own apartment when her parents kicked her out of the house. They didn\'t like her much and only were happy when she was gone or her sister Cayla wer there. She hated Cayla, but decided not to draw on it.
Her apartment was small, but it could fit two people if she worked something out. She would sleep on the couch until she earned enough money to buy Tyler a bed and she would have to buy Tyler new cloths too. She didn\'t expect Tyler to pay the rent and she wouldn\'t ask. The poor guys house and family was just burn\'t down.
She shook her head and got up to make some soup. How the day could change so quick she didn\'t know, but she did know that Tyler was going to have to get a lot of love from his other friends and maybe one more...then her thoughts trailed off.
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SS: Well the second chapter is done and if I get two more reviews for the next chapter I will make a new chapter. so review please.
Tyler: *crying* No not my parents and sister.
SS:There ok its jsut in the story.
Tyler: oh, well in that case you BITCH.
Countinue or Stop?
Starry_Skies: Well Hello hello again. I would like to say thank you to the people that reviwed and for reviewing I give another Chapter.
Tyler: *mumbles* stop reviewing.
Starry_Skies: *Turns to Tyler* Is there a problem, because I can always stick you with Jin, I\'m sure she\'ll be nice to you.
Tyler: *Goes wide eyed* NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.......
Starry_Skies: Man, I say my sister\'s name and he freaks. I guess he\'ll shut up for awhile, but...Tyler dear could you do the desclaimer?
Tyler: Fine...Starry_Skies owns the plot, the characters, and anything else that is thrown in here. If any one steals she will track them down and personally give them to her sister Jin, who is a mean little bugger and should go to HELL!. *WHACK* I mean she\'s really nice and we should all respect her. Bye bye.
Starry_Skies: Before I put the next chapter up I would like to pay tribute to all the people who reviewed, so here were the reviewers.
1. Dadella 2004-12-13 id # 2035104383 eep
CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!!
You can\'t just leave it at that!!!!
I really want to know what he was told!
and you\'ve done a good job, setting up the character developement so far... That\'s always a peeve of mine, when the characters are poorly done, but you\'ve managed to pass THAT little test...
^_^
SS: Thank you very much Dadella for your ethusiastic Review.
2.Rombach 2004-12-13 id # 2035104406 no fair! Cliffies suck!!
I want to see more!!
SS:Again, thank you very much Rombach, and no cliffies don\'t suck...they make the story more interesting, but there will be no cliffie in chapter 2.
3.Anime_Chik 2004-12-13 id # 2035104531 That was great, but...I no people in my school by those names, you wouldn\'t by any chance go to a school by those names would you...well I won\'t critisize so please please please please please, make another chappy soon and I promise that I will be a greeat reviewer for you. Thank you.
SS: Anime_Chik I did not take this from a school setting or my school, I do no know any by this name except Esperanza and for anyone who wants to know, that is me. My name is Esperanza and that\'s all I\'m tellin you...so as I say this in the most polite way...READ THE STORY!!!!!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 2. Tyler\'s Discovery and Esperanza\'s new Room-mate
Prevous Chapter
Tyler ran out of school and ran all the way to his house, Esperanza was right behind him. She didn\'t know what happened, but she was about to find out...
***********************************************************************
Tyler was down on the ground sobbing when Esperanza finally cuaght up to Tyler. When she looked over to Tyler\'s house it was in flames and the firefighters were trying their best to put the flames out. She knelt down next to Tyler as Tyler clung to her for support. His things were in there and so were his family, who were still asleep, because they all had the flu. Yes, his parents and little sister died along with all his things and memorys in the house.
Esperanza couldn\'t take it, she cot up and ran over to a firefighter to see if anyone...anyone at all survived. The firefighter gave her a strange look. \"Um, girl, there\'s no one home.\" He gave her another strange look then went to check out another firefighter. Ezperanza shook her head in disbelieve and ran over to Tyler.
\"Tyler...Tyler,\" she said pushing the poor boy. Tyler looked up at her, his eyes watering.
\"Wh-what is it, E-Esperanza, I\'m not in t-the m-mood for one of y-your jokes.\" Tyler looked away little sobbing noise\'s coming from him.
Ezperanza pulled him up and looked him in the eye. \"This ain\'t no joke, Love. I talked to a Firefighter and when I asked him if there were any survivors he said that no one was home, so think about. No one is home so that makes that only your house was burn\'t down and not your family.\" Tyler\'s face shone when she said that and he hugged her and yelled thank god to everyone that he went past.
A firefighter stopped Tyler and asked if he was someone that lived in the house, when Tyler nodded the firefighter took him over to a firefighter truck and set him down. \"Boy I need to tell you somtin...\" Esperanza came over to sit next to Tyler and the Firefighter looked up. \"Excuse me Miss, do you live here too.\"
\"No I don\'t, but this is my best friend and he is like a brother to me, so please don\'t tell em to go.\" When the firefighter looked at Tyler for his openion he simply shook his head and waited for the response of the firefighter.
\"Well, there were people in the house, three to be excact and...\" Tyler\'s eyes welled up with fresh tears and he cried. Esperanza took Tyler into her arms and started to rock back and forth, trying to calm the estatic boy.
She looked up,\"Is there anything else that you want tot tell us so we can go.\" She had a look of pure fury in her eyes and she was ery pissed. First off they shouldn\'t have a fucking firefighter who doesn\'t know the facts and second why the hell did they not look inside to find any person in the fucking house.
The firefighter nodded his head. \"Well this might be obvious but all three people died and, would you guys like to no how the fire started.\" Esperanza wispered into Tyler\'s ear and he shook his head. She looked at the firefighter and she shook her head for Tyler\'s response. \"Ok, and well is there anywhere, boy that you could live, Your house is unlivable to anyone and we don\'t give the will\'s stuff out until your 18.\"
Tyler couldn\'t believe any of this. He went into totla shock and Esperanza saw it. She stepped in like an older sister would and said,\"I have a house where he can live at, I also have cloths, so if you excuse me, I think I will take him there. And with that she picked up Tyler and she started to walk off to her house.
^^^^^^
Esperanza had put Tyler into her bed for awhile and sat on her couch. She had her own apartment when her parents kicked her out of the house. They didn\'t like her much and only were happy when she was gone or her sister Cayla wer there. She hated Cayla, but decided not to draw on it.
Her apartment was small, but it could fit two people if she worked something out. She would sleep on the couch until she earned enough money to buy Tyler a bed and she would have to buy Tyler new cloths too. She didn\'t expect Tyler to pay the rent and she wouldn\'t ask. The poor guys house and family was just burn\'t down.
She shook her head and got up to make some soup. How the day could change so quick she didn\'t know, but she did know that Tyler was going to have to get a lot of love from his other friends and maybe one more...then her thoughts trailed off.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
SS: Well the second chapter is done and if I get two more reviews for the next chapter I will make a new chapter. so review please.
Tyler: *crying* No not my parents and sister.
SS:There ok its jsut in the story.
Tyler: oh, well in that case you BITCH.
Countinue or Stop?