Crimson Moonlight
folder
Original - Misc › -Slash - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
18
Views:
14,997
Reviews:
61
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
4
Category:
Original - Misc › -Slash - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
18
Views:
14,997
Reviews:
61
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
4
Disclaimer:
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to people, living or dead is purely coincidental. This work is sole property of the Author and unauthrorized replication is strictly prohibited.
Super Important Note
Alright, first thing's first. I'm SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER sorry.
That being said, I'm apologizing to all my loyal readers for the extended hiatus this story has been on. I just couldn't continue it, because, for some reason, I wrote myself into a corner I couldn't get out of. I also spent too much time focusing on smut scenes when I should have worked for more character development. So, I'm going to let this story fade into obscurity BUT to all you Kyrios/Ren fans out there, don't distress.
I'M REVISING THE STORY.
Completely.
I'm going to go back, and rewrite this story from the beginning, and yes, it'll be different (not me rehashing the same story you have all read)
So, I'm currently working on the first chapter of the new story, and I can already tell you all that it's going to be more ark oriented than this story was (by that I mean, Kyrios/Ren will spend 3-5 chapters in one setting, instead of the sparatic way chapters jumped this time.)
The only reason I feel I can do this now, is because ALL of the amazing feedback I have recieved. I lurve you guys, and thanks to you all, I feel I have become a far more compotent writer, and while I'm not yet perfect and I'm proned to dumbass mistakes, I can only improve from here.
Thanks again to you all, and I'm also sorry.
To readers of Silver Spoon, I'm not going to abandon it to work on this new project. In fact, Chapter 5 is already done, I just have to proofread it and it'll be ready.
If all goes well, the new story (Which may be only called Crimson) will be posted by Wednesday. I've already wrote part of it, and Ren's a little bit different, but Kyrios is the same jackass we all know and love.
Sooooo, if you guys care to read it, here's the little bit I already have of the revision. This isn't proofed, it's just to show you how the story will start.
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Ren yawned, another boring day laying in his cushy bed, watching television, snacking on whatever brand potato chips happened to be sitting in the pantry, and pretending that no one else in the house existed. Ah, routine. It's not like he had much else to do, nothing else he could do. He couldn't perform athletics because of his frail body, and he couldn't attend public schools for the same reason.
He'd been ill since he was young, and now, eighteen years old and with the best educations high brow home tutors could provide, he was deemed to be little more than a figure head.
Langston Enterprises, his father's real child. The corporation he shelled all of his money, all his time, and all his love into, while Ren was left as little more than a bed ridden nuisance, and a pleasant baby photo on his father's desk to give his clients the illusion of him being a "family man."
Wasn't all bad. College would be waste of time, since he was already settled into an arranged marriage where he would "run" the corporation once his father retired: in death.
Jerry Springer, initially a turn off, but Ren felt a little white-trashy today. Nothing better than watching two overweight men with few teeth fighting over a woman whose only redeeming quality was having the number of teeth of the two men fighting over her combined. The number never equaled more than ten. But, she knew how to make babies, and the two men knew how to make crystal meth. And who said that didn't define love?
"I see that you're watching bad television again." The voice was sweet and melodious as it beckoned Ren's eyes to the open door. The doctor, beautiful brown eyes, and silky chocolate hair hanging in thick tussles around his face. He was Ren's newest doctor, no more than a month, but Ren had fallen in love almost instantly. Dearest Dr. Azrael, the man Ren wanted to be his.
"There's nothing on Doctor, and I can't go outside...." Ren brushed aside his brown bangs and glanced to the window by his bed, a firm oak standing proud outside of his second story window.
"So you rot your brain with such filth?" Azrael took the remote and turned off the television, much to Ren's bemusement.
"I was watching that!"
"Don't make me punish you, Ren." He smiled, such a heavenly smile. "I'm your doctor afterall, I could make it so no one ever knew."
"I had no idea my doctor was so kinky. I dig it." Ren giggled. He almost hated how he became around the beautiful doctor, giddy like a little school girl. The doctor could say he was a mass murderer, as Ren would laugh like it was the funniest he had ever heard just for his approval.
That being said, I'm apologizing to all my loyal readers for the extended hiatus this story has been on. I just couldn't continue it, because, for some reason, I wrote myself into a corner I couldn't get out of. I also spent too much time focusing on smut scenes when I should have worked for more character development. So, I'm going to let this story fade into obscurity BUT to all you Kyrios/Ren fans out there, don't distress.
I'M REVISING THE STORY.
Completely.
I'm going to go back, and rewrite this story from the beginning, and yes, it'll be different (not me rehashing the same story you have all read)
So, I'm currently working on the first chapter of the new story, and I can already tell you all that it's going to be more ark oriented than this story was (by that I mean, Kyrios/Ren will spend 3-5 chapters in one setting, instead of the sparatic way chapters jumped this time.)
The only reason I feel I can do this now, is because ALL of the amazing feedback I have recieved. I lurve you guys, and thanks to you all, I feel I have become a far more compotent writer, and while I'm not yet perfect and I'm proned to dumbass mistakes, I can only improve from here.
Thanks again to you all, and I'm also sorry.
To readers of Silver Spoon, I'm not going to abandon it to work on this new project. In fact, Chapter 5 is already done, I just have to proofread it and it'll be ready.
If all goes well, the new story (Which may be only called Crimson) will be posted by Wednesday. I've already wrote part of it, and Ren's a little bit different, but Kyrios is the same jackass we all know and love.
Sooooo, if you guys care to read it, here's the little bit I already have of the revision. This isn't proofed, it's just to show you how the story will start.
*********************************
Ren yawned, another boring day laying in his cushy bed, watching television, snacking on whatever brand potato chips happened to be sitting in the pantry, and pretending that no one else in the house existed. Ah, routine. It's not like he had much else to do, nothing else he could do. He couldn't perform athletics because of his frail body, and he couldn't attend public schools for the same reason.
He'd been ill since he was young, and now, eighteen years old and with the best educations high brow home tutors could provide, he was deemed to be little more than a figure head.
Langston Enterprises, his father's real child. The corporation he shelled all of his money, all his time, and all his love into, while Ren was left as little more than a bed ridden nuisance, and a pleasant baby photo on his father's desk to give his clients the illusion of him being a "family man."
Wasn't all bad. College would be waste of time, since he was already settled into an arranged marriage where he would "run" the corporation once his father retired: in death.
Jerry Springer, initially a turn off, but Ren felt a little white-trashy today. Nothing better than watching two overweight men with few teeth fighting over a woman whose only redeeming quality was having the number of teeth of the two men fighting over her combined. The number never equaled more than ten. But, she knew how to make babies, and the two men knew how to make crystal meth. And who said that didn't define love?
"I see that you're watching bad television again." The voice was sweet and melodious as it beckoned Ren's eyes to the open door. The doctor, beautiful brown eyes, and silky chocolate hair hanging in thick tussles around his face. He was Ren's newest doctor, no more than a month, but Ren had fallen in love almost instantly. Dearest Dr. Azrael, the man Ren wanted to be his.
"There's nothing on Doctor, and I can't go outside...." Ren brushed aside his brown bangs and glanced to the window by his bed, a firm oak standing proud outside of his second story window.
"So you rot your brain with such filth?" Azrael took the remote and turned off the television, much to Ren's bemusement.
"I was watching that!"
"Don't make me punish you, Ren." He smiled, such a heavenly smile. "I'm your doctor afterall, I could make it so no one ever knew."
"I had no idea my doctor was so kinky. I dig it." Ren giggled. He almost hated how he became around the beautiful doctor, giddy like a little school girl. The doctor could say he was a mass murderer, as Ren would laugh like it was the funniest he had ever heard just for his approval.