rate_review Reviews

As a courtesy to your readers who stcuk with tis story through chapter 17, it would have been kinder of you to use the opportunity to write chp 18 a proper ending to what we have been reading. I was ready to give this story a raving review. I see very few grammer errors and the story makes good sense as is. I loved the caracters, how they developed and the whole scenario was fun and cool. There was lots a action, and the reader could see it unfold as it went along.
Too many authors claim that they want to rewrite and never do or ruin what was already an excellent tale. Please do not make that mistake with this story. I really enjoyed it. Just giv it a happy ending on chapter 18 and create a sequel. But please don't ruin it.

Yay so much smut -drool-

your story is awesome. and the idea of a third seer was good. i mean, in a world as big as our, even if they are a couple hundreds of seers, it would be still considerated rare. and it would be great if there was a third person interested in Phoenix, you know, they say sometime jealous is needed for someone to confess loving another.

I don’t know if I’ve ever told you how much I LOVE this story, so I’m telling you now. It’s AMAZING ^w^ And so so addictive! So much stuff has happened, bad and good, but it’s all so interesting. I love the whole Seer thing, Ren is awesome. Kind of like a seke, since he tops and bottoms, but he isn't all totally submissive, he can give as good as he gets. Plus he is adorable :'3

Kyrios, that is a kickass name, and I love Ren's nickname for him xD And even though he isn't always nice, I am beginning to really like Dante, which is another awesome name. He is like the bad tough guy who is falling for the freaking cute and loving Phoenix, who was a little crazy early on in the story (o wo)

And the whole storyline, with the cult that is after the Seers, who just want to be with their guys and left alone. This last chapter, The Great Escape, the escape was indeed great Cx I loved Kyrios's plan to get out, and how him and Phoenix actually got it to work successfully.

Ohh, the introduction of new characters! And GASP another Seer? Eeek, I'm so excited to see what happens! I love it all. Keep it up!

Aww almost sad not seing a partner switch XD
Lol everytime ithink i know where you are going, you change course again :)
Well done on keeping up the suspence :D

Foursome foursome foursome! Need I say more XD
Lol Kyrios is gonna be pissed when he wakes up :P
And that little teaser was neat, i can't wait... sexual tension is the best! ;)

Your men act like women.

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A little mushy for my tastes but I can be a bit of an angst queen so that's ok. I still think dante and ren should get together. I'm not sure how a foursome would work out.....anyway keep up the good work.

Ummm Dante smex *droool*
Those two are adorable playing cat and mouse like that! :D
Oh and hit me if i'm not imagining something very bad right now *cough*foursome*cough*
Lol XD
Can't wait for the next chapter!

lolz Phoenix is so pathetic (in a good way I mean).