The Ultimate Loss
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Angst › Slash - Male/Male
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Angst › Slash - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
3
Views:
2,016
Reviews:
5
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. I hold exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
The Ultimate Loss
“He’s just pregnant, Taki, that’s all it is.” Komi murmured, reaching up and patting the other man on the shoulder. He smiled softly; trying to calm the daddy to be’s worries as they stood there. “It’s natural for him to get sick to his stomach… its called morning sickness.”
Taki shook his head, sighing as he looked down at Komi. “You don’t understand.” He murmured, shaking his hands a bit as he shifted. “It’s more then that… he’s getting so weak he can’t he even get out of bed. He’s so sick he can’t eat at all… Komi, please, look over him again, this can’t be normal.” He was more worried then he was letting on, the sensation making him pace more often then not, he didn’t sleep at night, just watching his lover to make sure he was still breathing… that he was still there. “Please…”
Komi sighed but nodded, standing up to move with Taki. “Fine, I’ll take another look at him, ok?” He didn’t figure he’d find anything different but… he could always look. Last he had checked, Kiyoshi just had a severe case of morning sickness and just needed to relax. He would check again though, just to soothe Taki’s worries.
The check turned up just what he thought it would, Kiyoshi’s stomach was upset because of the severe morning sickness and he was weak because he wasn’t eating as well as he normally did. The albino was naturally weak anyway, the way he had been treated early on in his life making him that way. Komi told Taki what he had found before leaving the two parents to be alone, telling them it would all even out and Kiyoshi would be fine in just a couple weeks.
He was wrong.
By the time two weeks passed, Kiyoshi had become completely bedridden, his body too weak to even stand on his own. He had stopped talking; his voice so weak when he even tried that barely anyone could hear him. He slept all the time, curled up in his lover’s arms as Taki cried. They still couldn’t find anything wrong… everything pointed to Kiyoshi just being pregnant, he was just… weak. It had to be something else.
“Just calm down, Taki, we’ll figure out what’s wrong with him, I promise.” Komi murmured, reaching up and pressing his hands against Kiyoshi’s rounding stomach. Surprisingly, the child was still alive… they just had to be very, very careful. It was a fight to keep Kiyoshi alive also. He was barely eating at all now so the healers were feeding him through IV’s; keeping him hydrated just the same way. They didn’t know what as causing it but they were intent on beating it… they would keep their little psychic alive.
“He’s getting so much weaker… why won’t he snap out of it?” Taki asked, his hands shaking as he held the unconscious man in his arms. Kiyoshi had been losing consciousness for the past couple days, his body shutting down for a few hours before he woke up again. It was a vicious cycle that was taking a toll on him, a rather bad one.
“We’ll fix it, I promise we will.” Komi murmured, sighing softly as he pressed even more healing power into Kiyoshi’s body. There wasn’t a lot they could do… not without knowing what was wrong but… this widespread healing should at least help a little bit. He pulled back once he had used all he could, sighing as he saw the pale mans condition hadn’t changed… not in the slightest. “We’ll fix it, I promise we will Taki.”
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Taki looked up from his kneeling position, his body shaking as he watched Komi walk up to him. He had cried, he had cried so much and now he was… done. Now… he needed to think of what to do. “Komi…” He whispered softly, looking back at the bed he was kneeling by. “You didn’t fix it.”
Kiyoshi had died.
“I’m so sorry Taki.”
“Just go away… get away from me.” Taki could feel new tears welling up in eyes; his hands gripping at the empty sheets where his lover had once laid. His lover… and his child… he had suffered the ultimate loss. He had lost everything… everything that was important to him. Tears poured down his cheeks again as he laid his head on the bed, sobbing his sorrow into the covers still smelling of Kiyoshi. He hadn’t changed them… he wouldn’t change them. They were the last thing he had… the last comfort he had.
“We did everythi-”
“Just get out!” Taki suddenly yelled, looking back at Komi with tear drenched eyes. “Get out and leave me alone! You wouldn’t even admit he was dying, how the hell did you do everything you could!?” He was up and on his feet again at that, shoving Komi out of the room before collapsing beside the bed once again. He let himself grieve, once again his tears staining the blood red covers as one, single word escaped his throat.
“Kiyoshi…”
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AN: Ok, now, you see what stress does to my writing.
This is an alternate ending to a scene in an rp that me and Nat did together. In the RP, Kiyoshi didn’t suffer this fate.
Komi and Taki are Nat’s.
Kiyoshi is Mine.
Well, I dun have a lot to say about it, just read the warnings and be sad with me.
BTW, this is NOT and RP, me and Nat did NOT RP this, it was simply based of an RP we did.
Thank you so much for reading and don’t forget to feed the author!
The thumbnail was found on creative commons on Flikr and can be found http://www.flickr.com/photos/brianatwebbmoto/376457478/
Taki shook his head, sighing as he looked down at Komi. “You don’t understand.” He murmured, shaking his hands a bit as he shifted. “It’s more then that… he’s getting so weak he can’t he even get out of bed. He’s so sick he can’t eat at all… Komi, please, look over him again, this can’t be normal.” He was more worried then he was letting on, the sensation making him pace more often then not, he didn’t sleep at night, just watching his lover to make sure he was still breathing… that he was still there. “Please…”
Komi sighed but nodded, standing up to move with Taki. “Fine, I’ll take another look at him, ok?” He didn’t figure he’d find anything different but… he could always look. Last he had checked, Kiyoshi just had a severe case of morning sickness and just needed to relax. He would check again though, just to soothe Taki’s worries.
The check turned up just what he thought it would, Kiyoshi’s stomach was upset because of the severe morning sickness and he was weak because he wasn’t eating as well as he normally did. The albino was naturally weak anyway, the way he had been treated early on in his life making him that way. Komi told Taki what he had found before leaving the two parents to be alone, telling them it would all even out and Kiyoshi would be fine in just a couple weeks.
He was wrong.
By the time two weeks passed, Kiyoshi had become completely bedridden, his body too weak to even stand on his own. He had stopped talking; his voice so weak when he even tried that barely anyone could hear him. He slept all the time, curled up in his lover’s arms as Taki cried. They still couldn’t find anything wrong… everything pointed to Kiyoshi just being pregnant, he was just… weak. It had to be something else.
“Just calm down, Taki, we’ll figure out what’s wrong with him, I promise.” Komi murmured, reaching up and pressing his hands against Kiyoshi’s rounding stomach. Surprisingly, the child was still alive… they just had to be very, very careful. It was a fight to keep Kiyoshi alive also. He was barely eating at all now so the healers were feeding him through IV’s; keeping him hydrated just the same way. They didn’t know what as causing it but they were intent on beating it… they would keep their little psychic alive.
“He’s getting so much weaker… why won’t he snap out of it?” Taki asked, his hands shaking as he held the unconscious man in his arms. Kiyoshi had been losing consciousness for the past couple days, his body shutting down for a few hours before he woke up again. It was a vicious cycle that was taking a toll on him, a rather bad one.
“We’ll fix it, I promise we will.” Komi murmured, sighing softly as he pressed even more healing power into Kiyoshi’s body. There wasn’t a lot they could do… not without knowing what was wrong but… this widespread healing should at least help a little bit. He pulled back once he had used all he could, sighing as he saw the pale mans condition hadn’t changed… not in the slightest. “We’ll fix it, I promise we will Taki.”
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Taki looked up from his kneeling position, his body shaking as he watched Komi walk up to him. He had cried, he had cried so much and now he was… done. Now… he needed to think of what to do. “Komi…” He whispered softly, looking back at the bed he was kneeling by. “You didn’t fix it.”
Kiyoshi had died.
“I’m so sorry Taki.”
“Just go away… get away from me.” Taki could feel new tears welling up in eyes; his hands gripping at the empty sheets where his lover had once laid. His lover… and his child… he had suffered the ultimate loss. He had lost everything… everything that was important to him. Tears poured down his cheeks again as he laid his head on the bed, sobbing his sorrow into the covers still smelling of Kiyoshi. He hadn’t changed them… he wouldn’t change them. They were the last thing he had… the last comfort he had.
“We did everythi-”
“Just get out!” Taki suddenly yelled, looking back at Komi with tear drenched eyes. “Get out and leave me alone! You wouldn’t even admit he was dying, how the hell did you do everything you could!?” He was up and on his feet again at that, shoving Komi out of the room before collapsing beside the bed once again. He let himself grieve, once again his tears staining the blood red covers as one, single word escaped his throat.
“Kiyoshi…”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
AN: Ok, now, you see what stress does to my writing.
This is an alternate ending to a scene in an rp that me and Nat did together. In the RP, Kiyoshi didn’t suffer this fate.
Komi and Taki are Nat’s.
Kiyoshi is Mine.
Well, I dun have a lot to say about it, just read the warnings and be sad with me.
BTW, this is NOT and RP, me and Nat did NOT RP this, it was simply based of an RP we did.
Thank you so much for reading and don’t forget to feed the author!
The thumbnail was found on creative commons on Flikr and can be found http://www.flickr.com/photos/brianatwebbmoto/376457478/