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for The Ultimate Loss

by Anestshia

person afan
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
aha..story getting even more interesting. Will be anxiously waiting for next chap.
person kylee123
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! This story already has such a pull on my heart. The appearance of Kiyoshi's ghost brings tears to my eyes. I feel like crying but I feel hope at the same time. I feel hope because little Kiyoshi is still around but it is so sad that he is still there waiting to have his baby. I wonder if he is stuck there waiting for Taki to join him. I hope you keep going on this story. I really want to see what happens next.
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, even tho it's so sad...
u r not gonna leave it at this, right? I hope u r gonna continue this story, it can become so much more interesting.
please, please update another chapter soon! ^^
person kylee
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waah! Is Kyoshi in another of your fictions? It is so depressing.
person crazykitty
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The beginning of the story is so sad but very interesting writing

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