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Thursday Evening

By: selfglorifyingone
folder Romance › General
Rating: Adult +
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Thursday Evening

This was based on a conversation I heard between two people. Then there really was an exchange of money. That was a funny interaction.

Anyway, I decided to try something different from what I normally do. I decided to just try to write something that was sweet. I think I succeeded.

The part after the border is the prostitute's thoughts/feeligns/etc.

As always, reviews are appreciated to improve the writing style.

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I filled my car up all the way today. That cost over thirty bucks. This was a luxury I've not had in a time. Even without cable, and with both jobs, I still barely have enough. But- I have enough. I have enough. I can keep going for another week.

For three hours I will have him. I can be happy.

I've told no one. Not even him. Maybe tonight I will. But... it's too hard to say, and he knows it. It's our night, though. Thursday is always our night.

I wish he'd be happy. He's too mournful. What if I miss him? Or if he's not there? He drives me insane. I should not go... he's dangerous. That's what they'd say, if they knew.

But they do not know.

I'm driving now. I see him. He's still too skinny. 'You should eat' I tell him. He does, he says. I hand him the money, and I take him home. I ravage him physically, while he does the same mentally. I beg him to eat something. He does, a sandwich, and makes me one too.

And now is the time:

"Thank you for your services."

"No problem."

"You're expensive, but you are worth it."

He just smiles and leaves. I start to think of how I can afford him next week.


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Today's Thursday. It's usually slow tonight. For everyone but me. I've got a repeat John. I know a few things about him now. Not a lot, but way more than I did at the beginning. It's the price of the occupation.

He's handsome. Well-endowed. And he always picks me. It's very flattering, if nothing else. He's like clockwork, too. He alwyas shows up on Thursdays, at around 12:45. Ever since we met, he's been here.

I keep expecting him to fail. To not be here. To leave me with some strange man I don't trust.

I don't even have to search for his car. It finds me easily.

I climb in and get handed money. Then, I am told to eat. I assure him that I do. That is why I like him so. He shows a bit of concern. A rarity.

He takes me home. It smells like him. He screws me literally, and mentally. I make sandwiches. As I turn to leave:

"Thank you for your services."

"No problem."

"You're expensive, but you're worth it."

I smile and leave. Outside, I close my eyes and steel myself for the upcoming week. I wish it were Thursday again.
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