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for Thursday Evening

by selfglorifyingone

person rosiel
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for finishing the story. it was great!
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the ending...

I'll play along with the stewardess and assume Jon and Andrew are safe.

You picked a really interesting way to tell a very interesting story!
person rosiel
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a cliffhanger? damn you! imma kill you if you don't update soon
person memorietrail
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh - sister is VERY evil.

Hope Jon can pull out the hero act...
person rosiel
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!:) hurry up with the next one so i can find out what happens next!
person rosiel
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story. please update soon:)
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear - that sister is a real troublemaker.

And Jon - trying so hard to please Andrew...

Please tell me they'll work this out!
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating - I worry about the boys.

Glad everyone is on the same page about the sister.

The bit about taping the TV show was strangely touching...
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How very sweet. They both come out of the experience realizing how important they are to each other.

I definitely don't have any 'writing tips' for you!