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by InvidiaRed

person anon-ish
schedule June 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Is Zebul really bluZe? Why does funny bunny have to die? If they are Ned friends won't they help him? I'm glad Raune is going to get Ned I just hope that it's love not just lust on Raune's part. I hope some one tell's Gortac that his son killed the magma spider I think he'd be proud~! thank YOU for updating!
person Mona Thompson
schedule June 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing chapter!!! I love the Demon Car! Frisky thing aint it? That would be alot of fun...like transformers in a porno! Ha! I hope someone finds Ned soon. Im not sure he can take much more. Oh! And Funny Bunny! Cant wait to find out what this one is like! Im sure its gonna be scary as hell if it can turn poor bastards into nothing but a flash shadow! Goddamn you are so fucking talented! Moooooooorrrre pleeeeease♥
person Mona Thompson
schedule June 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My gods you paint a vivid picture with your words! I can see Ned with the holes and the ants and that flower on his chest with the smell...wow. And poor Gimp...so sweet. I just want to hug him and make it all better. The plot sure has thickened...and it just keeps getting thicker and thicker! I realize how dirty that sounds now that I typed it out! Ha! Anywho...i would love to know more about this purge. Whatever it is it can't be good! I cant wait for an update♥
person Mona Thompson
schedule June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn i hate spiders buuuuut if I could call them to my rescue when I was being raped in my peehole I think I may learn to love them! Poor Gimp...he sounds so sweet and it sucks he has to be in pain. I hope the spiders help him too!♥
person anon-ish
schedule June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this last chapter was exciting! I feel really bad for Gimp I'm glad Ned is able to use his curse to his advantage! I hope Guiedo get's his come up-in's! I also hope Ned's brother isn't out to kill him!
person anon-ish
schedule June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is going to happen to NED???? Is there no way to purge those demonic ants? I mean can't the angel feather used to heal help at all??? I'm happy Ned save Gimp he's just so helplessly cute! I hope the one who cursed Ned will kick Guido's ass! I hope Ned's brother lives long enough to meet Ned and possible help him or they help each other! poor Gimp and Pravuill I hope they both can escape! Will the chains Ned and Gimp have ever break when they leave the velvet rooms? Will the one who cursed Ned want to have Gimp instead? How did Gimp end up in that place anyways? Thank YOU for the updates!
person Mona Thompson
schedule May 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ned! You naughty little weiner bobber;) update soon please♥
person anon-ish
schedule May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
TALK ABOUT SOME CRAZY ASS SHIT! I love the names you've come up with and the whole of limbo it's self! I wonder who Ned really saw in the mirror? Will Guido get his come-up-in's? Gimp I'm already enjoying him and his twink ways! I look forward to reading more!
person anon-ish
schedule May 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
N3
person Mona Thompson
schedule May 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Well thats one way to stop people from raping you! Ants in your penis! Haahaha! That was a great chapter!