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by InvidiaRed

person Anonymous
schedule May 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM
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person Mona Thompson
schedule July 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Fucking. Gods. This was brilliant. Fucking brilliant. I have been so busy and I just finished it. Im speechless. You are such an amazing writer. Its almost...poetic. No. It is poetic. If that makes any sense to you at all. That ending was awesome. I love what they did to Guido. Absolutely legendary indeed. Im so happy that baby Ned is back with Funny Bunny. There couldnt have been a better note to end this tale on. Back in Funny Bunny's arms where he belongs♥
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Right… 'cause that whole thing made sense. An interesting premise but completely lacking cohesion (and in need of some serious editing).
person anon~ish
schedule July 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was just WOW! SO I take it Funny Bunny will not get the chance to slowly kill Guido? Ned really can't be dead can he? I mean I know he's not dead but his body is???? OH man I know I know I'll just have to wait. That's okay though it's worth it! Thank YOU for updating!
person Mona Thompson
schedule July 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I miss your updates and hope you are okay♥
schedule June 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Honestly just can't wait to see the next chapter! I wonder how Ned will react to Funny Bunny...
person anon-ish
schedule June 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
FUNNY BUNNY IS NOW MY HERO! Where is Guido in all this mass destruction? I hope Ned or Funny Bunny get to do that legendary torture to his demonic ass! I HOPE FUNNY BUNNY SHOW'S GUIDO HOW TIGHT HE IS AND WHAT IT MEANS TO BE A BITCH AS SOME ONE ELSE'S MERCY OR LACK THERE OF.... Thank YOU for updating!
person Mona Thompson
schedule June 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Gods I fucking love the way you describe shit! I can picture everything! You are fucking twisted in the most amazing way. Absolutely brilliant. I cant wait for Funny Bunny to fuck up some more peeps! I love that Ned is still determined to leave and isn't broken...update when you can!♥
person Mona Thompson
schedule June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods! Funny Bunny is everything I was hoping and then some more...MUCH MUCH more! What an amazing character you have come up with in him! I love it. I cant wait to read more...especially what fucked up shit Funny Bunny can get into in The Velvet Rooms! Update sooooooooon please♥
person anon-ish
schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
tell me Guido is going to get has ass handed to him by Funny Bunny! Don't tell me he's mad at Ned... How is Ned anyway? I hope Gimp is doing okay as well! thank YOU for updating!