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Ow, some time ago I made the mistake of reading all 4 chapters posted on your homepage in one go. so now, when I see a new chapter being updated, I get all excited, only to discover later that I already read this one. Now finally you posted the last chapter I had unfortunately read in advance, so next time my sense of anticipation will be rewarded!!! please, don't take too much to post ... I'm curious about what happens next!!

also, this was a great chapter. Bion, he threated Dazbog with such tenderness. he's perfect for Dazbog: with his gentle nature and his cheerful and lively character, with time, he'll be able to mend Dazbog's saddened and lonely heart.

Oh that was fantastic!!! Now we finally know the past of them both!!!! I really would love this sneak peek thing!!! That would juat be fantastic!!!! See you again!!!

Wow. I've just read the whole story until this chapter and I loved it. The universe you've created is really interesting and original and the characters are complex and likable. I really want to know what will happen to Bion and Dazbog, and I was so sorry for what happened to them to make them exiled. Now I also wonder if they'll meet Zage again, or someone else from their pasts, or the owl that Dazbog knows. The problem with that, of course, would be that it would be pretty unpredictable how someone else would react to their friendship. And if they become more than friends, like it's headed towards, it could bring them even more problems if someone found out...

Also, at the beginning I was a bit surprised that homosexual relationships were a big taboo in this world because you had put mpreg and hermaphrodites in your warnings, but then I realised that you hadn't mentioned that in the prologue. So I guess this is something that hasn't happened before and could be a new mutation in the future? If so, couldn't homosexual relationships be permitted too? Because how I see it, if procreation is the most important, the result is more important than the means... Right? Also because their religions are based on nature and don't seem to carry the human prejudices sometimes found in ours (at least some of them) - and homosexual relationships do exist in the animal kingdom too!

Sorry for the little rant, but your story is really compelling and challenging on some aspects - and that's a compliment, of course! I can't wait for Bion and Dazbog's relationship to move forward and for cubs to appear! It would be another challenge for the solitary Dazbog, but I can see him as a great dad, trying not to make the same mistakes his father did. And I cannot see Bion as a bad parent either - he has too much of a caring and 'nurturing' personality. Don't you think?

Well, whatever you decide, I'll look very much forward to the next chapter, and I wouldn't mind being put on the mailing list too. :) Thanks for sharing your story!

I don't regret signing up for the update list, at all ! My review will be short but at 3.30 am, my brain isn't functioning as good, but i thought i could resist the temptation of reading it tonight but well, seems not. To sum up my opinion : TOTALLY LOVE IT ! I really like the way you narrate the story, this intimacy between Bion and Daz, slowly evolving and with just the right tone. I could spend hours reading more chapters ... So you'll have to write more and more of them ! ;)

Hi there !! AT first I thought it sounded like another story about a solitary wolf and a horny feline prince who lived together that i've read once, but your characters are shapeshifters (which i prefer by the way) and really, i love the way you write. It's really captivating and more touching. The progression is just right. Plotwise, I wish the lion prince hadn't died so that he could tell the truth. Or maybe he's hidden while he's healing and people pretend he's dead ? Ok, that's me wishing because the situation is so unfair. This is a story that i'm definitevely going to follow. Would you mind adding to your update list ? See you !

Amazing story :)So happy i found it!

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Well this seems mucho interesting... I've very curious to see how this plays out...
Just asking but how many chapters do you have completed so far?
I think the cat/bird/dog/human thing is very interesting to me, i'm wondering how it will play out
i've got to say that I liked your story from the get go cause I'm all about exile yo

I'm totally loving this story and would love to be put on an update list. My email is neko.goddess.nyx@gmail.com

Oh that was really sad!!! Poor Bion!!!! Those cheethas were so mean!!!! But it's nice to finally know what happend to get him banned!!!! thanks a lot!!! Hope to see you soon!!!