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December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh please keep writing! :D fantastic story!
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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love the story so far! I just found it today. Why hasn't it been updated yet? :O Has it been abandoned? What's going on???? :S
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September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As this section is for reviews, I'll reserve my questions for your AFF Forum topic for this story.
I really love this story so far, including the world you have created here. I'll be adding it to my list of recommended reading on my author page. My own stories (that I've posted thus far) are much darker, but I'm also a sucker for romantic hurt/comfort stories.
The world is fully believable and well detailed, but not to the point that it became a dry history lesson.
The main characters are well developed and you employ my favorite technique of switching perspectives so one can appreciate the thoughts and feelings of more than one character. All in all this is an excellent story so far, and I do hope you continue it. I won't press for updates, since I know how hard it is to get them written with three stories of my own going, but I do enjoy this story very much.
I really love this story so far, including the world you have created here. I'll be adding it to my list of recommended reading on my author page. My own stories (that I've posted thus far) are much darker, but I'm also a sucker for romantic hurt/comfort stories.
The world is fully believable and well detailed, but not to the point that it became a dry history lesson.
The main characters are well developed and you employ my favorite technique of switching perspectives so one can appreciate the thoughts and feelings of more than one character. All in all this is an excellent story so far, and I do hope you continue it. I won't press for updates, since I know how hard it is to get them written with three stories of my own going, but I do enjoy this story very much.
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September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much. It's cute and a bit fluffy (somewhat literally) but still has a serious aspect to it. Fluff is nice but straight fluff leave much to be desired, you've got a good thing going. If you ever need help with editing, I'd be more than happy to help. bunky290@gmail.com
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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot that you have written so far. It is original and well written. The characters are well fleshed out. Please update soon.
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September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Please more! I can't wait for their relationship to develop more!
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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If I kiss your feet will the next chapter go up faster? I would prefer to just wait for the chapter than to read a preview, previews are evil little teases..
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story!!>.< I beg you to add me to the update list, please oh mighty authoress!!
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
These two are so good together, it's grea to finally know both of their histores. I am curious if the dingo is going to show up one day now since you said hasn't show up 'yet' .
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay ! Great chapter ! It's great to know about the past of your characters...
Life was not fair for those two... But now, they have each other...
Waiting for the next chapter :))
Life was not fair for those two... But now, they have each other...
Waiting for the next chapter :))