rate_review Reviews

I am so glad you updated this story. It's great to see how thir relationship is progressing. I love how they interact with each other. I was hoping something along those lines would happen with the boys ever since he found the red clover in the storage area. Can't wait to see what happens. Hope for more regular updates now that you're writing again.

I love you, so much. It's like a slightly belated birthday present (it being on the 28th) and I couldn't of asked for a better one!! I've been following this story since you posted chapter one and I've loved it since. Was so very sad when you stopped posting for so long, every month or two I would re-read it again, because I just couldn't not!

I honestly thought you were going to have Bion drink the red tea in a hopeful attempt to get pregnant, because he honestly believed Daz would make a wonderful father. That he felt bad he couldn't give him a child of their own, or something..

I can't wait for the next chapter, I wonder how long Daz can keep himself from playing with Bion's new bits?? ;)

Xx
Cia

P.S - I reviewed this like a minute ago but something went screwy so I don't think it actually posted. So re-reviewing :P

<3

Mind...completely..blown..can't stand the epic-ness! I'm so glad you continued with this story, it made y day when I saw you had updted becuase I have truely fallen in love with your characters and universe. (Can I adopt them pweaase? Maybe just on the weekend?) But can't stay still in anticipation for MORE!!XD

No flames and for sure you haven't lost a reader in me. I find this story well written, thought out, and executed. The idea behind why the "carnivores" adapted the way they did was unique (although a bit disturbing for us humans). I've enjoyed the pace you set for getting Daz and Bion together and I find them adorable as a couple. Please continue to write and add new chapters as I will definitely be coming back for more.

Thanks so much for writing and sharing.

lunamist

I wasn't quite sure how you were going to play out the Mpreg but I love how the story is progressing. Although I do feel bad for Bion having to suffer I'm so glad you updated, your writing just keeps improving <3

I'm so happy you started to update again. Bion and Dazbog deserve their story to be told. Good work :)

Love this first chapter

Why would you expect to lose readers when you had these very warnings in your story blurb? I had expected something like this long before you reached this point in the story, if readers are that dense then that's their fault not yours. By the way I was glad you updated it made my day.

I'm so happy for the update ! :)
And this update is amazing ! Hot, really hot !
And full of tenderness too...

And this last chapter doesn't change my mind !
So Bion is male and female ? Well, can't wait to know what's happened next !
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Not a bad start though I feel like it was a bit of an information dump. If you could show most of this in the story rather than just telling that usually gets the reader hooked faster, but I shall continue to read. this has good potential