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i only found 2 spelling errors^.^ i really like how you started this~ you mispelled partying (you forgot the y) and you should have used saw insted of say for when he found his dad and shot. other than that, i liked it~ please keeep going, cuz i really want to know what happens next~^.^~
YAY!!! first review~ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

eh?! over 300 views and i am the only reviewer?! shame on those slackers^.^ anyway, yet again, i love how this is comming. the only word i noticed this time was that u mispelled tears as tiers. now mind u i am also bad with spelling, so i looked at it and was like ".... that dosent look right.." but even then it took me about a minute to finally figure out the correct spelling :P and i live in america. on top of that i read online all the time, so my spelling isnt as bad as it once was, but even still... well, anyway, poor evan>.< i really want to give him a hug. feel kinda bad for his dad too. well, anyway, in the next chapter can u tell the readers that THEY SHOULD FREKIN REVIEW>.< it is what give's authors the will and motivation to write. i have seen some readers who wont update till they get a set number of reviews, for instance they would request 5 reviews before they would update. but, seriously, tell them that from one reader to another, the least they could do is atleast give u a review, cuz if they like it, then they should say so. gah, i got on a tangent... oh, hey if u want me to look through the chapters for spelling errors (even though i have, so far,found hardly any) i would be happy to beta for u~ my email is dgraymansorrowinvoked@gmail.com