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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The image you have for night especially, "Wings unfurling she spreads her feathers wide shaking off the scintillating black" is marvellous - really top notch wording, totally loved that. Simply fantastic.
Absorbing imagery throughout though!
Absorbing imagery throughout though!
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Zip: that was breathtakingly beautiful, fantastic description of nightfall. KUDOS! Thanks for sharing, PW
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful! Vivid imagery, and in a drabble, too.... ::applauds::
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's a fantastic telling of how each entity plays its part in the bringing on of night. I loved the way night skimmed the water to start a wave of shadow, and the idea of the moon rubbing her eyes before rising is pretty sweet too.
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy the personification. Poetic. Well done.