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by sinounva

person JeAnEttE
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...

Sena may have not killed himself, but instead someone killed him...I wonder where the key will lead...someplace near Kiego...Keigo is a jerk, and so I Yuto, I knew he was hiding something....marrying Akari for her wealth...I wonder what the uncle will find.
person Will Treaty
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi again,

Ok, so now we are finding out poor Sena might have been murdered, but by whom? I wonder if it's Keigo or his brother who did it. I bet it was one of them. Now, we know that Keigo and his brother are very bad people, and Sena's poor sister doesn't suspect that she is being used. I feel really sorry for her. I kind of like Kyouya and wonder if he and Seiya will eventually fall in love. I hope Kyouya finds out what happened to Sena and helps Seiya with his plan of revenge.

This story is awesome and full of mystery and angst which I love.

Thanks for updating, W.T.
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, ok, I guess chapter two cleared up a few things. But how can Sena's sister not realize that her other brother isn't Sena? And wait, didn't she know Sena committed suicide? That part is confusing.

And why is Sena's twin pretending to be him? And no one thinks it's the twin? Maybe I need to re-read these chapters again; I feel like I'm missing something.....
person kylee123
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaoilovers, Keigo takes the cake for being the meanest bastard ever. What a jerk he was to poor Sena. It makes me want to cry for him. I hope Seiya will get to do all sorts of mean things to him. Love it so far.
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is so sad and I am a little bit confused as to what is going on. i like it very much and feel so bad for the twins and whatever it was that caused him to kill himself. I think it was that keigo jerk for hurting him so bad what a cold hearted dope. pls update soon this story is very interesting and i have been drawn in to it, so need to know what happens next. thanks for sharing it.
person Will Treaty
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Oh my gosh, I really like this story and am intrigued to find out what is going on. It is very well written and a mystery that has a lot of questions yet to be answered. Well done, waiting for the next chapter to see what happens.
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. I'm really confused though: When that bastard Keigo (sorry, I spelled it wrong) broke up with Sena, Sena ran out in the rain and then his someone named Seiya came by and talked to him. At the end of the chapter, Seiya told someone his name was Sena. Is Seiya really alive? What happened to him? I'm so lost.

Anyway, I'll look forward to reading more; maybe the next chapter will explain things more.....
person JeAnEttE
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh I love this story so far! I hope to see it updated soon!

How sad, I'm guessing that Sens died and now his twin Seiya is pretending to be him...his other brother is right, the truth will come out eventually...and no wonder why everyone feels as if Sena looks different...because he isn't the true Sena. I wonder what happened to Sena....keep up the good work! Keigo really did hurt Sena; what he said to him was horrible.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! In only one chapter there are already so many twists and turns. I think that Sena killed himself over Keigo's heartless cruelty. Sena and Seiya were twins. Seiya has come back for revenge against those who hurt his brother. He has assumend his dead brother's identity to do this. I think that their father, who was a cruel man, left his family and took Sena with him then remarried. It looks like Akari might be Sena's half-sister by this marriage. There is another brother (yet named) who knows Sena's dead, and their mother(but we haven't been introduced to her yet) is alive too. It looks like Yuto is just as heartless and cruel as his brother Keigo, and Akari is clueless to this. I can't wait to find out what Seiya playing the part of Sena has planned.

How often will you be updating this story? If you start a mailing list, I would like to be added to it.
person Bella
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a sad story! I think I kind of know what's going on (not totally sure though) and am anxious for the next chapter. I would think that Kiego (since he had a relationship with Sena) would have known it wasn't him even though 5 years have passed.