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for A Christmas To Remember- Oneshot

by sinounva

person Mary Lou
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love Christmas stories and this one did not disappoint. It was kind of mean of Haruka's brother to lie to Ray, but it accomplished what was needed. I loved the ending with the three of them there celebrating Christmas. By the way, this was very nicely written.
person renee
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww baby Ryuu! Haruka is just as innocent and sweet as he is in Follow Your Heart. Surprised to read that Ray had a mate before. So does that mean Ray has 2 true mates or is the dead one just a mate who he loved and Haruka his life mate who he also loves? I don't know whenever I read about the surviving partner finding another mate/love after the other mate/love has died, I always wondered what would happen if they all meet again in heaven or hell or in their reincarnations. Always a pleasure to read your work.
person kylee123
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is especially sweet when I realize that these are Ryuu's parents. I can't wait to find out more about them in the main story. I am eager to find out what the people from another planet are like. Thanks for the romantic ending!
person addiena_saffir
schedule December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the sap, fluff, and gushiness of this fic were astronomical....i LOVED it *squeal*