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February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was SUCH a GOOD story. I mean really. I hardly ever come to aff anymore, mostly because its a pain to try to pick out a good story amongst all the other stuff, but I'm really glad that I stumbled upon yours. I really have to give you your props. It was just so rich. I mean, the emotion seemed so real. You really have some talent. It kind of reminded me of a more mature version of the perfect chemistry series. Anyway, really good job. :)
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I've read this entire story. From what I've seen I'm guessing your target audience is the YA {Young Adult} market. Am I right?
I've noticed a bunch of misspelled and misused words, otherwise the plot is rather captivating. I would suggest getting a beta reader for this and the next one. They help with catching the things I pointed out. Wonderful story and realistic feeling characters. XD
I've noticed a bunch of misspelled and misused words, otherwise the plot is rather captivating. I would suggest getting a beta reader for this and the next one. They help with catching the things I pointed out. Wonderful story and realistic feeling characters. XD
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December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's not the end............... is it?
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November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Are you combining the 2 stories?
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November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaayyyyy xD ure finallY finished again!! So when r u gunna stay the sequel AGAIN?? (:
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November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please keep updating! I love this story, I loved it before you decided to repost and its killing me waiting for the end :)
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October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and ive started reading it since you first published it.. Before it got erased.. And my word you are taking awfully long to update it and restart the sequel .. When do you think you'll carry on with that?
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September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is awesome! I can't wait for more updates!
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay...I'm going to start with the good. First, I LOVE your storyline. I really hope you update soon, I mean I read all 22 chapters in one sitting. My only critique is minor. The way you're writing this is sometimes choppy and it's hard to figure out who's point of view we're in at times. Other than that, keep up the good work, really enjoyed it.
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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
que bueno, ahora me pregunto que va a pasar entre ellos, espero muy pronto nuevos capitulos, por favor no tardes, ana maria