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for The White Phoenix

by sinounva

person fairy4u
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Want more pleaseeee!!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last fire Phoenix and I know I'll love the white Phoenix too. Keep up the good work!!
person kylee123
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the new story. I confess that I am still mourning for Dan, but this story feels bright and hopeful. I like Skylas and I like the idea that Ramsey's son looks exactly like Dan. That will make Ramsey feel guilty when he looks at his son. I also love how naughty Urian is already. I can't imagine growing up as the demon king's son. I see that he is scared of meeting Mira. I wonder how Mira feels about meeting him?
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ho-ho i want to see Mira in hot pursuit:)
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice new story. I like the image of Alistair walking out with Skylas thrown over his shoulder