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August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think the idea behind this story is very interesting but to tell you the truth I was highly confused. I think the prologue or first chapter could use some more information to kind of clue the readers in more on the situation and such. Or maybe it's just me whose confused =)
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August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please write more, the concept is terrific and the writing well done.
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August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting concept you have here! I'm totally curious to read more. Elysian sure has a fiery personality, lol!
Thanks for sharing, and I'm looking forward to the next update!
Thanks for sharing, and I'm looking forward to the next update!
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September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmmm seems like a good story i can't wait to here more