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And then what happened?

I am really digging the story man, but just update. Just write it. You can go over a chapter how many times over and over. Change it later when the story is done. I'm loving it but I want to start reading when the real excitement comes in and shit starts to fuck up. He;s going to this creepy house and they haven't even gone into the house yet. Aww yeahh, shits going down and he doesn't even know whats going to happen. Whats in store for your characters? Need to talk? Send me a message, i'll pass some ideas to you. I got ideas for things, but can't ever execute them.

That was just evil to stop it just there, author darling, especially when I want to find out what is going on. you better hurry with the next chapter. Grrrrrrrrr!
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:O evil cliffhanger of doooooom!

Not like I have much to say... I do cliffhangers all the time. I wanna know what happens next now... NOW!

Hahah, I know all about wrestlers! lol

Great story, so far. I hope they don't get themselves in a heap of trouble in that old house.

Oh, and isn't Sara's cat Peirre, supposed to be Pierre? And walked passed the house, I believe is supposed to be past the house.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey, I was looking at your profile when I realized, you're the Quax girl! What's going on with that story? Any updates?

You already know what I think of it so far, but I'll say it again lol. It's going great :D

Seductive beginning, draws me in and makes me want to read more. I have a thing for old empty deserted houses and when I was younger... I got in a couple and explored them to my hearts content. Sometimes if your quiet you can hear the ghosts of their previous owner muttering softly just out of sight. These shadowy houses somehow can vibrate with the past lifes that once lived in them. Some might consider them scary, but I never did to me a empty house is more sad and lonely than scary! G

I will look forward to your next updates.