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Poor Edie. I hope Lavan is the one who saves her. I REALLY hope you get Lavan and Edie together in the end (and that Cain never has her. Not even breifly.)

Poor, poor Edie. I really hope she and Lavan get to be together (happy and alive. Maybe babyz if your feeling generous). Lavan seems like a really nice man. I really hope Cain dies horribly.

Ho no, I don't think that I like this chapter.
It's seems to go in a direction that I don't want (and at reading a lot of commentary I'm not the only one)...
I fear the next chappy now snif! snif!
Be strong Edie

Great update - i'm on pins and needles with the anticipation of Edie & Cain's next encounter! Aleah is a riot - but NO WAY did she orgasm and Pip not feel in through her butt - cum on! I love the fact that I can truly HATE Cain - what a dick (pun intentional) for thinking Edie should be grateful - I can't wait until someone in the story gives him what's coming to him - and i can't decide whether I want it to be Verity or Edie - or possibly Lavan.

I so look forward to your future chapters - And BTW THANK YOU for your attention to detail in spelling and grammar - oh, that reminds me there's one place where Aleah is taking off her panties and suddenly they're "Edie's panties" - i think it's just a mixup - but it always throws a reader into a tizzy when you're sitting there wondering "huh? why the hell is Aleah hording Edie's panties?" - LOL

muy bueno, variti es una bruja, ya que no lo quiere a cain, y espera para casarse y matarlo, al igual que las arañas, ana maria

Holy shit...Aleah likes Mark....wow....I mean...whoa...wow....You struck me stupid there. As a side note, i hope Cain drops Verity...quickly. And painfully, cause that woman gets under my skin. (and i have a feeling that even if she kills him, in death Cain will find a way that she doesnt get a penny of his money. he seems like a pre-nup type of dude). And part of me is excited about Edie and Lavan but than i keep thinking about Cain, and i'll admit, i'm partial for evil dudes so i kinda want him to get his way and have Edie... well, update soon plz!

pobre aleah, en las garras de su hermana y ella es tan cobarde que hace lo que le dicewn, que pasara con eddie, espero muy pronto nuevos capitulos, ana maria

Cain does not like Verity anymore, if ever ! Why does he stay with her ? She's a mean bitch with everyone and with her sister !!

ooooooo, i love the aleah and mark angle!! i actually registered on affnet JUST to say that!

Cain is completly crazy and disillusional. I want him to suffer a long time before he die a paintful death.
And I certainly don't want Edie just think that she can love him, suffer a case of Stockholm syndrom.
The simple fact that he can think that it's because of him, of what he do to her, that make her strong, that he try, attempt to justify what he did, is so wrong on many level.
It's sickening. She's strong because of her, of what she's make.
She deserve so much better.