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for Edie

by SasatheShy

person lovelyl
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was waiting for the truth to be revealed whether or not others believe it or not.
person fantome1
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, hope that you don't get Cain and Edie together. Even briefly. Great chapter, as always, but I'm worried about the direction you're taking it (Lavan/Edie good. Cain/Edie bad).

Still, brilliant chapter.
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMGZ! I must know what happens! Please keep posting. This story is getting better and better! =D
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pins and needles until I see what Cain will do to Verity - I really hope she suffers!
person lovelyl
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Amana hope she comes out of it well or at least alive and not hating Edie.
person fantome1
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Amana..... I hope she's rescued soon.
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh. What happens to poor Amana?! I must find out!
Does Cain find out and punish them all severely?
Please post more!
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GREAT update - i love that Amana has such powerful orgasms - i'm so jealous - hate that she's going to hold it against Edie - and i really hope that Verity eventually ends up at this disgusting prison - it will serve her right!
person fantome1
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, but poor Amana. I hope Lavan is careful when dealing with Cain, or it could end very badly for him, and I want to see Lavan and Edie get their happily ever after ending (with babies, preferably)
person lovelyl
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Amara. Its good to see ur going to continue the story even if you don't have enough reviews. :D