rate_review Reviews

I just read the last couple of chapter in one go.
And... I'm not going to continue.
I can't accept the direction that this story take. (I read that I'm not the only one)
You have the right to chose what you want to happen in your story...
Rape-love story it's something that make me sick. (personal story with rape)
Sorry.
You're really talented and surely if you write an other story I'm going to take the chance to read it.

Gwen...with the hope that you didn't take offense of my critique.

I would of put Verity with the 2 men for the night. LOL! I like how you update regularly. What happened to the other guy Edie was seeing?

While I miss the hot and heavy - these last two chapters are definitely stringing me along. Of course I'm with the group that hates that Cain is winning Edie's heart - but of course we can't really control our hearts can we? And YAHOO - love that Verity got her pride so cut up - though I wouldn't put it past her to come back with a vengeance since Cain isn't throwing her in the dungeon - i really wanted Bo and Gil to get her! And now - poor Lavan - what will he do with Edie's heart wandering? Thanks for the quick updates!

Poor Edie..... And Amana. And Lavan. Good grief I hope someone smiles soon (other than cain.) I so hope Edie comes to her senses soon (and that Cain's death is painful, drawn out and humiliating).

Great chapter, by the way.

Your loyal fan.

Dave

I have to admit that I really love Cain and Verity together. Call me a masochist, but I would love to see more of them together in upcoming chapters. Maybe as a flashback, going by what Verity's sister said in the last chapter that Verity hadn't always been like that? Less Edie and Cain MORE VERITY AND CAIN!
I absolutely love this story. I don't want it to end.

Am I the only one who likes Cain/Edie here? XD

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Brilliant chapter as always, but I just have one thing to say about that kiss..... NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. ahem. Cain is clearly pure evil. Please have Edie come to her senses soon and run away with Lavan (preferably after they've killed Cain and Verity. And the rapists.)

I hope Amana and the others get a happy ending too.

Your loyal fan.

Dave.

que pasa con edie ella realmente se enamoro de cain, que es lo que pasa en la posada desde la violacion de anama, edie se quedara o se ira, cain como va a resolver este problema, espero pronto nuevos capitulos, muy lindo este, ana maria

DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!!!

At the beginning of that last chapter, I was losing all of my faith in Edie. I hate that she was falling for Cain, her own rapist, and how she believed his words about being selfish over Amana's attack. Things got better as she consoled her friend, and my femslash-adoring personality wished it would have gone a step further XD, but I digress. At the end, however, when Edie came out with it to Tonisha, I felt something. Hope, I think, that Edie will get over this "infatuation" she has with Cain. Something better be resolved. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next. :)