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for Edie

by SasatheShy

schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just can not WAIT for the next chapter! I just love this story!
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
greatest chapter yet!
person lovelyl
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooo a roster fight, now this should be interesting. LOL!
person lovelyl
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was hot I must say. LOL! Its good to see Cain has regret especially about what he did to Edie. I kinda feel for Leven the poor guy is going to be heart broken.
person szellman
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter. thank you for sharing it :)
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hated this chapter. :(
person fantome1
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, as always. Cain is seriously warped, and I hope he gets what's coming (ie death). I really hope Edie holds out, at least till Lavan can save her.

Seriously, though. This fic is top tier amazing.

Your loyal fan.

Dave
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I still don't know what to think will happen. Will Verity come after Edie and actually confront her face to face? Will Verity's sister finally make it with Mark? I hope she does. :) I Cain going to end up having sex with Edie again? Please post more. This is getting even better.
But to tell you the truth, I think I would have liked it if Cain had also locked her up in the cell with Gil and Bo and had them do the same thing they did to Amana and then kill them. Haha! >:)
Keep posting! You're doing great!
schedule October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. This just gets better and better. Please keep posting! I'm loving every paragraph. ;)
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy bueno el capitulo y me gusto que cain reconozca que ama a edie, ana maria