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que momento, cain cree que va a ser padre y laban tambien, que va a pasar ahora que los dos hombre se encontraron, por favor una muuy pronta actualizacion, ana maria

Ah ha! I knew she was knocked up. In a way I wish it was Levans but I must admit I do want it to be Cain's idk why considering what he did to her. Update ASAP I really want to know what is next. Please.... :D

que lio, que va a pasar, el hijo que espera edie es ce cain o de laban, por favor que va a pasar, espero muy pronta actualizacion, ana maria

I know I'm probably the only one, but I like Edie and Cain. I hope the baby is Cain's and it further makes him want to change for the better and be the man Edie wants him to be. I think Edie is in love with Cain. Just the fact that she was depressed because she hadn't seen him for five weeks. I love your story and I can't wait to see how this triangle unfolds.

Update cool. :D I am seriously becoming hooked on this story look for a update every day. :D Edie's is knocked up me thinks.

Please oh please for the love of all that is pure, good and right, don't end this with Cain getting to be with Edie. He is, simply put, pure molten evil blended with a touch of insanity. Nothing can excuse what he did, plus he isn't repentant for the evil of what he did, just that he hurt her and damaged his chances.

Lavan isn't perfect, but he's a good man and he does truly love her and unlike Cain he is willing to sacrifice literally everything in order to be with her (his home, his friends and his place with his people).

Great chapter, but I'm really worried about where you seem to be taking this story, especially considering how amazing your writing is. Its your choice how it ends, but I'm just saying that I really think that ending it with Cain/Edie would be a horrible mistake (and don't get me wrong, I LOVE the Edie/Lavan pairing and think those two should be together, but that isn't the only reason why I'm against a Edie/Cain ending)

Your loyal, but concerned fan,

Dave.

Amazing... I did not expect anything in these last two chapters. I'm on the edge of my seat and I can't help but want more. Great job on this tail. You've done such a wonderful job making your readers bond with your characters and I can honestly tell you I was shocked at what happened to Pip. Again, just a great job. I'm waiting on the edge on my seat for the next chapter!

Lavan is a fool but he is sweet. I kinda feel for Cain though in his egotistical mind he will think Edie choose Lavan. Curious does Cain have a first name? I'm assuming Cain is his last name.

About time Caine sort remorse. Idk about staying away from Edie she might think he doesn't care for her at all.

These past few chapters have been a mixed bag. On the one hand: NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO at the Edie/Cain scene and Pip's death. However the quality of your writing is still staggeringly good and it seems that Edie is finally starting to see the light (hopefully. maybe).

I feel that Pip's death, though tear-jerkingly sad, was necessary. Hopefully considering Cain's awful and cowardly conduct Edie will FINALLY realize what a evil, vicious, conniving, inhuman bastard the man really is. Plus, he was a coward (not only did he have Hyatt fight for him, but when Lavan won he still fled, despite Lavan being badly wounded (he probably saw how enraged he was).

Poor Lavan though, talk about a bad week: exhausting trip, proposal rejection an losing your best friend in a fight that, while he couldn't have possibly predicted the outcome (Pip's death), he could have stopped. Go team Lavan/Edie 4ever.

Your loyal fan,

Dave