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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very good.
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far. I like all the characters so far and am interested to see how ans when Cain will show up, especially with Lavan showing interest in Edie. Good main character, she shows very believable characteristics and is very well written. Keep it up, looking forward to the next update.
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MMM very very interesting!! Please continue!
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
esta bueno, pero yo esperaba mas accion con edie, pero espero muy pronto nuevos capitulos, ana maria
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
New characters... It seems that Edie's going to have more than one pretender ^^
It's a little slow but I suppose that you have to present the characters before THE big meeting ?!
XDD
It's a little slow but I suppose that you have to present the characters before THE big meeting ?!
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nothiing good can come of those guys coming to Edie's new place of work.
With that said, another lovely chapter :) Very descriptive and lots of character development.
Love it. Keep up the amazing work.
With that said, another lovely chapter :) Very descriptive and lots of character development.
Love it. Keep up the amazing work.
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August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dude. I didn't like how graphic the rape was, but you're the writer so if you think it was necessary, I'll trust it. I guess it sort of enraged me (which is a compliment to your writing since it can actually affect me). I want to see Edie kick Cain's ass. I want some freaking revenge. I can't wait for the next update.
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August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you update once a day. lol :D
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August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, interesting story! I'm really hoping Cain gets castrated later in the story with a dull butter knife... ^_^
Please continue!
Please continue!
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August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the fast update !
A new life for Edie but... In a brothel ? Poor girl's going to remember her nightmare every day !
Can't wait for more XDD
A new life for Edie but... In a brothel ? Poor girl's going to remember her nightmare every day !
Can't wait for more XDD