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Cain's really a cruel man !
It's difficult to think that he's going to fall in love with Edie !

It's been awhile since I read a F/M story since most of the time, I read M/M slash. Lolz I really like your story since there is so much angst in it...at least I think so. Captain Cain is a bastard, I feel so bad for Edie. T_T
If I was her, I would poison his food. I like the other guy though, he's pretty cute. I would love to read more. Thank you! ^^

Well..wow you really know how to leave it on a cliffhanger! That was fairly intense, her and the captain recognizing each other. I really could really feel her emotions :[ But on a good note, it looks like Edie and Lavan will become closer. He seems like a geniune guy if she gives him a chance...I guess I'll just have to wait and see how everything plays out :) Lovely work once again.

que capitulo!!!! realmente muy interesante, el encuentro de edie con el hombre que la destrozo, quiero saber que va a pasar, epero que muy pronto actualices, ana maria

And the Captain returned... And I'm not disappointed ! That's a great chapter !
Cain wants to have a word with Edie ?! Maybe he's going to say sorry ? As if that's going to be enough !
Thanks for sharing.
Can't wait for more XD

Nice chapter, very well done. I'm very interested to see what will happen between Cain and Edie as well as with Lavan caught in the middle. Update again soon! :)

Hi. I really like this story. I love Edie. :) How do you pronounce her name? I want to say it's like Ed-dee, but it is Ee-dee? XD Anyway, she's very adorable and I felt so bad for her in the end of the first chapter after her assault and that bastard that hurt her. I'm assuming that Cain, right?, and Lavan are the same person? So if Lavan/Cain(the rapist) is falling for Edie, I truly hope it doesn't work out. I can't imagine being in any sort of relationship with anyone who hurt me that much. I love this story so far though; the characters are thought out well and, like I mentioned, I have a huge soft-spot for Miss Edie right now and I wish her all the best. ^^ Update soon, please!

I like. :D

que capito preciosos, me esta gustando mucho, como se puede presentar el hombre de tu vida de la manera menos inesperada, espero que pronto subas nuevas actualizaciones, ana maria

They're so cute together !! ^^
Buuut, I'm still waiting for Cain ! XD