rate_review Reviews

I loved these two they were both hot and sweet at the same time and the setting for the story was wonderful :) It was a great read and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it ^_^

Very nice. Very nice indeed. I must admit I had my doubts seeing as you are not really someone I would think would write M/M. But this was lovely. You truly are a versatile writer which is a wonderful skill to have.

Wow, for someone not used to writing male smut, you certainly did your homework!!!! lol

This was a great story; I'm glad they got together. It made me so sad tho, to hear about Ravi's fears of being "found out". I think it's just horrible that people feel they have to hide their true feelings and they can't express themselves like men and women can. I mean, it's hard enough finding love, what difference does it make what gender the person is?

Anyway, excellent story; too bad it was a one-shot!

Excellent ending. I think you did a very good job of depicting realistic first time anal sex too. I also loved the scene with the bed and the view of the mountains. I really enjoyed the setting of the entire story. You did a great job in your first m/m story. I hope you write some more.

OMG, this is so well written!

I was feeling such sadness when Ravi explained how he felt; so scared to admit to anyone for fear of being killed. That's horrible! I'm assuming this story takes place a long time ago...

Anyway, just wanted to write to tell you how I'm enjoying the story! Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love it! I can't wait to read part two. Very nicely developed characters.