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it is an awesome title for a werewolf fic.i wish there was a tv series named like that. It doesn't need to be homoerotic, it can be hetero but I'd really like a good plotty were tv series... Btw. Love the bad chemistry between Col and E.AnywaY, it was cool him wanting E but still able to fantasize about those girls on the street. LOlz glad to see he can get it up either way it comes more handy in life then just homo upping.hahahahaha
I can't wait to see what you're up to with theses boys;)

Interesting story so far!

There is definitely budding chemistry between Calom/Elliot and hope you don't rush it. As I was writing this review, I was going to mention the Elliot's attitude disparity between the first two chapters... in 1, there is anamosity while in 2, there's concern. Now I see that Elliot is actually the level-headed one of the pack and most likely Jeremy has paired the two so Elliot's rational calm will offset Calom's hothead nature.

One distractor for me with this story is their bloodthirsty and murderous nature. Agreed, they are werewolves but Calom's desire to slaughter all the humans in town or want to take those two teenaged girls off to have his way then disembowl them seems to overshadow erotic dreams about his roommate.

I really like this story so far. Calom is so cute trying to deal with his unresolved attraction to Elliot. I can't wait to see what happen's next.