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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"BRING IT ON, MAGS!" is what Mel should've war-cried out! ;D
There were a few spelling/grammatical errors, yes, but not enough to make me stop reading. :) I really hope that Ellie starts to remember Mel, but she does seem to have an inkling about her. Something's definitely there so that's good. Maybe next chapter they'll talk and it'll help with the memories, yes? :) Also, I am very curious about how Mel knows about the different way Ellie'd chosen to go that day of the accident... Fishy... ;p It keeps me on my heels, let me tell ya!
There were a few spelling/grammatical errors, yes, but not enough to make me stop reading. :) I really hope that Ellie starts to remember Mel, but she does seem to have an inkling about her. Something's definitely there so that's good. Maybe next chapter they'll talk and it'll help with the memories, yes? :) Also, I am very curious about how Mel knows about the different way Ellie'd chosen to go that day of the accident... Fishy... ;p It keeps me on my heels, let me tell ya!
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May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
its goood its goood
:DD
scary mother in law
:DD
scary mother in law
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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
espero muy pronto nuevos capitulos, es una historia muy interesante, ana maria
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May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far! Please continue! :)