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person Nixed
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. I love the progression of the story. Update soon and keep your train of thoughts chugging. Happy be-lated birthday.
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm glad she's home now too! ^_^ Hopefully her being there will bring back stuff -- like that sailboat picture that she seemed to recall immediately. Maggie, though, I have a feeling will fuck things up for Mel and Ellie in the future because she's a skdjaskdjasfjabitch. Not that she's going to stop me from reading this further. ;)

ps - it's your birthday, yeah? if so, happy birthday! :)
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good for her! God, that Maggie is a bitch! I hope she gets eaten. And not eaten out, 'cause she DOES NOT deserve that at all. Update again soon! :)
person Celery22
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, wow. This story has me bouncing back and forth on who to think of as the protagonist. I think I'm just gonna root for Ellie. Good story, but reading about Maggie makes me seethe with anger and Mel is starting to worry me, depending on what she does about knowing Ellie was leaving. Keep it up!
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uggggggggggh, that bitch would. I really don't like the idea of her staying there. But I'm really excited to see how it does turn out when Ellie comes home. And Angie seems like a nice lady. ^^ Keep it coming, babe, and happy early birthday! :D
schedule July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww. :( It's like it's the end BUT I DON'T WANT THEM TO END! FIX IT! :p I don't want Ellie to get sick, either, so just stop bringing on the negatives, or I'll cry. /: Hah, it's so good, babe. I like it a lot.
person Sayahiei
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait to read your next chapter. Please update soon. I enjoy these kinds of fics and I look forward to your next update!!
person Nixed
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn. A very short chapter indeed. Keep the chapters coming!
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, hun! You updated! :D I'm glad to see there's some progress in Ellie's memory. It was a very sweet scene. Hope you update again in the near future. :)
person Nixed
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The story so far is very interesting and I see a lot of potential for future chapters. The mother-in-law is a very interesting character and I want to see more background history of her hatred. Also there were some visible grammatical mistakes but I could somewhat understand and follow along. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for your master plan for the couple.