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XD Oh Mel! If she would've dropped Ellie... Oh god, that would've been bad! She didn't though, so that's good. And I liked that she just collapsed right there beside Ellie. Cute ^^ As for the journal entries, I would say the more important points because they're probably more interesting, but if you want to stay true to Ellie's character, I would have her read them all chronologically, you know what I mean? So you kind of have to decide if you want to make the reader more happy by giving us the good stuff, or being true to Ellie because I think she'd want to take her time and read her whole life -- hell, I know I would. ;) Unless Ellie can just find those random dates in those papers all the time! XD Haha, whatever you decide!

Ehh...That's a really hard question. (Awesome chapter, by the way =] ) But maybe you should switch it around a little and relate it to the present situation at hand? I dunno...Haha, stop confusing my brain!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

yes thankyou for the updates
dammm alexiss lool i think you should keep it in chronological order

An affair, huh? Wooooooww Ellie. She let me down. :/ But I guess these things happen. I'm surprised Mel didn't whoop some ass on Alexis when she saw the lipstick on Ellie's cheek. Looking forward to your next update!

I love Meg! There must be something fueling her bitchy-nes. Maybe she was in denial for herself or had a bad experience in her childhood. Mel is looking more of a cool lone wolf. Will she have some action and kick some more ass?? Well, keep up the good work.

Simply put it: very cute! I wonder what happened to their relationship and why Ellie was moving... I love your updates and I'm looking forward for more.

I don't think Ellie wants to leave... ;) You've done a wonderful job with making Maggie the hateable character, so bravo! ^^ It was touching that their father told Ellie that he would accept her too; honestly made me "d'awwwww!" And I totally love the development of Ellie and Mel's relationship. Keep it comin', baby! :)

This is getting better and better. There were lil mistakes here and there but its coming along very well. I kinda like the father more than the mother haha. Lucas seems lonely... does he have a boytoy?? Well continue with the story!!

Another good chapter. ^^ I think you messed up on the dates in the diary, though? The third entry is dated before the Justin-incident and Haley says that that's happened months ago, so I think that's messed up a little. XD Other than that, I liked seeing the start of Ellie and Mel's relationship. Very cute. I can't wait to read more, hun. :)

Hi! I love this story, but I hate Magdalene, really. I think I'd need some yoga sessions if I had a mother like that. Or a punching bag maybe...? Poor Elie... Please tell me you won't let this story end badly... And please post more soon! :)