rate_review Reviews

Oh, poor Mel. :( But that sex scene was so hot! I was kind of moving my hips too... but yeah, it was very nice. I'm glad they finally did it! I wonder if there'll be a journal about after that because I have a feeling Mel would be apologizing for some reason -- out-of-control behavior maybe, haha. Anyway, I liked how at the end they kissed and Ellie muttered the big three and Mel just froze and welled-up. And Ellie tried to apologize, but I don't think it really counts if she doesn't even know what she's apologizing for. That's definitely a rough spot (not a soft spot!) for Mel right now... /= I want them to get past that so they can have sex in the present, damn it! :)

Very cruel! Well this is another cute installment. Sleep prevails even when your getting down and dirty haha. Your adding more characters! But you got to say, they must be very hot and bothered every night. Please continue and i can't wait what's in store for us!

I want to know more about Alexis for sure, but I don't want her to butt into Ellie's life again. I want Mel and Ellie to just rekindle what they had and I know the affair will tear that all up if it's brought back. I wonder if Ellie kept journals over that time period too? Guess I'll find out. ^^ I hope there's some Mel/Ellie romance coming up soon, whether that's in journals or present-time. I think they're well overdo. ;)

I would hardly say it's too slow. I have decided to call this a mystery story. Lol <.<

But really I am enjoying it for sure now. I know earlier in the story I was more addicted and less enjoying it, nut now I really like the possibilities for where this might go.

I can't wait for more, no pressure though, the slow plot pace works for you. You update often enough that it's more like you're adding more and more overall details, as opposed to taking forever as you seem to think you are. I for one really appreciate lots of detail.

Keep it up! ^^

Well done with the chapter. Lucas is such a wonderful older brother and I really love his progression. I get the feeling that Alexis must be someone very interesting person to catch Ellie's eyes if they were having an affair or not. I get the feeling the dad will save the day or something again haha the dad needs more air time!!. Well the story is getting juicy and i love it. Keep up the good work!

Superb. The plot is thickening! This is quite a cute installment and I am loving this mysterious woman. To tell you the truth, I think the chick that Ellie's cheating on or maybe cheating on is a total bitch than Meg lol. She's taking Ellie away from Mel... utter sadness. Well for the journal entries, you can randomize it or leave it in chronological order. Personally, I love it when a timeline is altered and the burning questions from the beginning of the story will be solved with more burning questions left unanswered til the finale. Keep up the good work and update update!

So that's the real reason why Meg hates Mel so much. But still... Meg is a very lovable but hate-able character! Very interesting... I thought that it was about that Alexis chick haha. I want to know more of this mysterious woman!!! Well I'm glad you updated and it's a good thing i checked again! I am loving Lucas bit by bit and Angie! Hopefully there is more hot scenes in the upcoming chapters. I wonder if Elie made a journal entry of her and Mel's first time together?? Sexy! Well keep on posting and I am looking forward for more!

I really liked the waking up scene. I hate Maggie for messing that up! I want more scenes like that! ;D I hope there's a journal about Ellie's first time with Mel, because I think that would be just awesome and awkward and cute to read! ^_^ But you're doing great! I love that you can update regularly, so everything's staying fresh in my mind. Keep it up! :)

Sweet. My wish came true. I knew Ellie had something going on! The burning questions are being answered. I get the feeling that the mom is going to be in the picture again!

Good gods, this story is such torture... such glorious addictive torture. You throw us through so many plot twists that my stomach is wrenching. I vote to keep up the slow and steady. You do such a good job of dragging it out. It's like serious teasing, and I just love it.

Keep it up. ^^;