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That is such a good ending!! i feel that it was short though haha. Well at least they both have a happy ending and a cute lil girl!!hmm maybe you should post up Ellie's journal entries for a fun read. Other than that, you could make a sequel or not its up to you. I am looking forward for your upcoming projects. I hope you post them soon!

I really loved it, all in all. I know I had ups and downs of not understanding why I kept reading it, for awhile at the beginning it was just so screwed up it was painful, emotionally, to read. I'm happy with your conclusion, it really shows that everything worked out pretty well, even Maggie. Speaking of Maggie, I'm really surprised she shaped up, but I'm also really really happy she did.

Thank you for writing a great story, it's kept me very well entertained. I gotta agree that a sequel would not be a great idea. Not unless it was just a story of either their daughter as a teenager or with them as background characters. I think they've all had their run, they deserve a good rest. ^^

P.S. The lack of sex fit perfectly, there was never any real reason for it, so I'm glad you didn't try to force it. A good story doesn't need sex, sex just happens in alot of realistic stories, just not this one, due to it's subject matter.


Thank you again! <3

Oh my! Mel you need a hug! This chapter made me teary eyed but it's so depressing. But i want to know what happens next. Don't be confused!! you need to continue the story!!! Make the ending a surprise!!

Gah! If they would just tell eachother everything they could work it out! Ellie is learning she wants Mel more than anything else, and Mel is working on her mother issues, if they would just talk it out and not yell it out they could fix it. >.< I hate how yelling just ruins everything, an honest discussion is ALWAYS better.

I love it, by the way, really hoping for a happy ending. Too many sad endings in my stories lately...

Say it ain't soo Mel!! This is a very good turning point in Ellie and Mel's Relationship. I wonder whats going to happen. It's a good thing that Ellie told the truth on what happened with Alexis. I'm a bit sad that they are going to break apart. I hope the next following chapters are uplifting and sweet.

Oh my indeed! Poor Ellie, all that guilt is getting piled up and its making me depressed as well.The chapter was short but sweet! I'm still disappointed at Alexis, that evil woman. haha Well continue updating and I can't wait for more!

Everything's starting to come together! She has to tell Mel, doesn't she? Oh man, please update soon! :)

Wow that Alexis chick seduced Ellie!! It all makes sense now but i get the feeling that you have more surprises up your sleeve. I wonder how Mel would react to this seduction in the hotel fiasco. I bet there would be some bitch slapping or even death.. haha Poor Ellie though, taking in all that information in one sitting. Please do on continue! I want to know what happens next!!

This is soo sweet. Meg is finally trying to get along with Mel!! I love you mini entries of dates and descriptions. The time line is cute. Love Family Guy haha.

Finally an update! I was waiting for your chapters to be up. Well i love how Mel is such a super hero! Always saving and protecting Ellie no matter what. The guilt, anger, and jealousy with this couple is so mind-boggling and i have grown an attachment to these lovebirds. This Alexis chick is starting to get on my nerves and i think there is more to it than Ellie's personal journal if you know what I mean. Please continue updating and the story is getting better and better every chapter.