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for You're My Angel

by ravielyaxis

schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good luck w/your contest. I've heard from a few people tho, that the Ipad is really no big deal.

Anyway...the chapter was good; poor Monica, not understand all the grown-up talk! lol

Yeah, I can definitely see how their dad would be confused the the "twin thing"! Now more than ever, he needs his wife; what would she have thought?
person kylee
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAH! So evil having their Dad catch the twins during their very first kiss. I was bouncing around happily because Nagami finally confessed to Kagami. Yay! What are they going to do? I guess more importantly, I hope their father does not freak out. Finding your twin sons kissing right out in public is a lot to take in at once. I loved the update. Please give us more soon.
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was missing this story! Glad you put your controls down to update! lol

So, I wonder what Pops is gonna say or do to the twins? I mean, he could never stand up to his own mother (except for recently), I doubt very much he could stand up to his kids.
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Kagami; I would have wanted to punch that old bitch also!!! Those poor kids; all of them, having to lose their mom at such young ages. So, so sad.
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I am so sad for the twins. I want to read more :-)
person kylee123
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the update. The evil grandma strikes again. How could she visit her son's home and speak so rudely of his children? Even if they were not his biological children, he has obviously adopted them as his own. She was probably a terrible mother to Jacob. I am so excited that Nagami worked up the nerve (through alcohol) to kiss his brother. Will they regret it in the morning? I hope not :-) I love the story. Keep up the good writing.
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy two days before your b-day!

Sad, sad chapter. I'm also curious as to why the twins' dad didn's seem like he was mourning. Maybe that's his way of dealing with his grief; keep it all inside and show strength for his kids?

As for his mother, shame on her! The kids' grandmother should just leave and keep her big mouth shut! Forever! God! I HATE people like that! What a bitch!
person kylee123
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There is a lot of pressure on Nagami right now He has to be strong for the whole family and resist his attraction to Kagami at the same time. I pray that they will not send Monica to live with the hateful grandmother. That would be such a disaster. The twins would never see her. The family needs to stick together right now. They need to support their dad too.
person kylee123
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday in advance!
person kylee
schedule January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 was awesome. Thanks for the dedication! I am just glad that I get to read your lovely stories. I loved the bully scene and the scene with Marie's fantasy family with Nagami. Marie is determined and hilarious! I love her. The rejection scene was pretty funny too. I got the feeling that Chapter 4 would take a bad turn. I am so sad for their mother. Her entire life was a struggle. I admire her for trying to raise a family even with the insults coming from Jacob's mother. At least her heart was happy before she died. I wonder what life will hold for the twins and little Monica now.