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for Along the Great Divide

by TheronVanyr

person kylee123
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! This chapter was so sweet and funny. I was so happy to find a new chapter with my beloved Wiggy and Mamoru. I love the way the chapter started with Ludwig enjoying the tastes of food and Mamo at the same time. The scene where Mamoru was calling Ludwig by his first name Marumi was very touching. I really enjoyed the honeymoon. Too bad that there is an upcoming war to prepare for. Keep up the good work. I am eager to read the next chapter.
person kylee123
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! I am so glad that the wedding went off without any complications. I am so happy for Wiggy and Mamoru. They deserve this time together. I am eager to see what the green powder will do to Mamoru.
person kylee
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so much fun! I am glad that Heno and Grato finally got to reconnect. I love seeing Mamoru playing love instructor. And of course Mamoru and Frei had to come back to spy on the couple. This chapter was hilarious. Things are always so interesting in Ludwig and Mamo's world.
person kylee123
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a sad story for Ludwig. So many painful memories to live with. It is hard to imagine that his own mother could have turned on him like that. You have a real talent for blending the sweet with the sad. My heart aches for Ludwig and Mamoru and I hope they will be happy with each other forever. Your characters are so vivid that I have a mental image of their true selves and their chibi versions as well - lol.
person kylee123
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Two beautiful chapters. The bedroom littered with rose petals and candles - I loved it. Ludwig just loves Mamoru so much (he really did wear him out LOL). Iam glad that Mamo went to visit Ludwig's mind again. i hope they really did get rid of Malacai's evil influence. The story is a joy to read. I love Ludwig because he is so srong and yet so vulnerable at the same time. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person kylee123
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! A wedding for the Lily Flower mage and Pointy Ears! I am beyond words with happiness for Ludwig and Mamoru! I am also glad that Heno managed to escape from Malacai. This story is awesome. I can't wait to see Mamoru's reaction.
person kylee123
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 14 and 15 were awesome. I am so glad that Mamo found the strength to defeat the spell that Malacai put on Ludwig. My absolute favorite scene is when Ludwig abducted Mamoru from the infirmary to drink his blood and feel him up and make love to him. That was SO HOT! It is one of my classic scenes that will always come to my head when I think of this story. I also loved the Belvasi mages calling them Lily flower mage and Pointy ears - So funny! It seems that Mamoru will never escape being called cupcake by Ludwig. Great writing.
person Erica
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the new chapters.
person kylee123
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I can't bear it. You gave plenty of forewarning but I never thought the Vampire hunters would catch up with them. II pray hat Ludwig and Mamo will be saved. I could not bear it if Ludwig has to do evil things to others. WAAH!
person kylee123
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an ending to this chapter! Ludwig went a little wild and crazy. I am so sad that they will have to leave Rhoma behind. As a mischievous younger brother he is like a breath of fresh air. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love this story.