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I'm so glad Jesse finally is letting himself be his "real" self. Although, even tho Jesse and Gabriel have known each other for quite some time, I think they're rushing things by having Gabriel move in so quickly. They should just get to know each other better first before they jump right into living together. I just hope it all works out!

Yay! They finally connected! And Gabriel was so sweet, taking his time w/Jesse. Hopefully Jesse can get past the stupid notions of what other people think, etc. and be able to be who he is w/o shame.

This chapter was absolutely lovely. Gabriel did a very good job with teaching Jesse how to make love. Very hot love scene. I felt so sad for Jesse when he was having his moment of fear. The idea of being abandoned by your family would really fill anyone with fear. However Jesse would not be happy if he was not true to himself. I am eager to see how his family will react to Gabriel. I think Gabriel is so awesome! I love him. I hope Jesse's family will love him too.

I loved the new chapter. I hope Jesse will be able to tell Gabriel why he has had such a hard time admitting that he was gay. I hope they get to some smexing too. I went to peek at the Deviantart pages. Very nice.

Absolutely brilliant. Very well written- the emotions come across so well. Can't wait for more!

I'm glad you updated this; I really enjoyed reading it! Yes, I agree w/Jesse; Gabriel certainly had plenty of other opportunities to get Jesse to open up to him. He certainly didn't have to do that in the bar. I mean, my God, he had Jesse all to himself in that cabin, during the summer, right, with the sports team? I mean, come on! He had every chance to talk to Jesse, and be as gentle as he was in this last chapter.

Anyway, thank God Jesse finally admitted something. I mean, his being w/Gabriel is an admission of some sorts. Hopefully, he'll fell comfortable to tell Gabriel about his fucked up brother's bad influence and then Gabriel will understand where Jesse is coming from.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Happy New Year!

WOWOW! This story is so good and I love how you have made Gabriel...I really like him.

Hope you continue this soon....it's great!

WAAAH! Update soon! I love this new story of yours. I am also a big fan of Pain and Pleasure. Jesse is so locked away inside. Gabe chose the not so gentle method of snapping him out of his denial. I can't wait to see what will happen with these two. Lovely story.

How could Gabe do that? I sort of see what he was trying to do but gosh that was really the worst way to do it. And Jesse needs to get his head out of his ass and tell Gabe that he really likes him. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Got to see where this story goes. Oh and I went to your deviant account and checked out your pic...they are great. I really like how you did Gabe and Jesse together...brilliant.