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for Room 213

by MaruMaru

schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Noyuki. Thinking he's losing his mind. Don't worry, kid, we heard it too. XD I like where this story's heading, and I don't usually like reading mysteries! If I'm not mistaken, you've yet to describe what Noyuki himself looks like. We got Kassu down, but not Noyuki.
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay...oh dear god, is that really the email for this account? Jeez...I gotta remember to change that later. Anyway, REVIEW TIME! XD

Kassu sounds like he might become a pain later on. I wonder just WHO crumpled up Noyuki's name and replaced it...and of course, who Noyuki's gonna end up with. But, I'll be patient like everyone else only because I am your ALL POWERFUL BETA buahahahaha...>.> ha ha.

Love eet! Can't wait to beta the next chapter.
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good start, sounds promising :) Wonder if there will be anything between Yuki and Kassu, and who the 'mysterious voice' might be? Keep going!!
person DJfrdrck
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It sounds like its going to be really good. So keep up the good work and continue.
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good start! Is his room haunted? He heard his name called the first time before he went into his room.

I look forward to the next chapter!

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