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really good story. i'm loving this already. i am thrilled to know what will happen next. I still wish that in the end, John would realize that he loves his family more than Chris, who is a total jerk! I hope Alex and David will be okay. Really long chapters and I love reading them! hope you will update soon!

I really like this please update it

I love bondage stories and am hooked on yours already. I think you should continue with it. I just hope David is not hurt by anyone and that Alex is able to keep their kidnappers occupied no matter what kind of humiliation he endures until help arrives.
Please keep up the good work and update soon.

Please write more. Very good story and hope to see new chapter soon.

pls email me at preciouslittlehope@yahoo.com when you update this story. I would like to be added to your list for story alerts. thank you. I really like you story.

I like your story very much. Pls continue with it.

Oh my gosh, I love this story and hope you continue with it. Please update at least once a week if you can. I hope that John finds out what's happening and rescues David and Alex. It better have a happy ending or I will be sad.

I hope you continue this story. I have never read one like it before.
Thanks for sharing it.

I like it so far. I think you should definitely continue and I didn't really notice any glaring grammatical errors. I think one direction you might consider taking is since the premise is Alex will do everything to protect his son, he either manages to do so or he doesn't. It is up to you as the author what your vision for the characters is. After you make that choice you have to plan events in such a way that he accomplishes that end goal. Personally I think to have a happy ending and still be interesting Alex should be able to market/bargain himself for his son to stay off the market maybe submitting to unspeakable acts of degradation. However, if you decided that he isn't able to protect his son despite his best efforts, you should have his son go out with a bang! Something truly heart wrenching would be really good dramatic artifice. I should stress that which ever way you go I am sure you will do a good job of it considering your excellent introduction. I should say my preference would be that he manages to protect his son working out some sort of deal with the proprietors.

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