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I hope Alex and david are reunited!

please update your storys so intersting and exciting i cant wait for more.

Wah~~~~ Where's the rest of the story!!! It's captivated me and I want to know if John ever made it to save David and Alex. I would also like to know more about the world that they are living in. Is it a futuristic like universe where technology has found a way to make males pregnant or what have you planned?

I don't know how I missed this update but I was reading another story 3-Corner and realized you were the same author. I love that one two by the way. This ch was good I didn't really find it lacking however as I am not the author I don't know what your intent was with this ch. I like the bump there at the end of Frank. I kind of feel like he should be the downfall of the whole operation with his cockiness. I am not sure if this is intended to be a mystery where you reveal a little bit of the plot at a time or more romance focused.I guess I will figure it out as you go along. Feel bad for the boys and their ordeal but you do really well with the descriptions and portrayals especially Chris. Happy New Year!

Chapter 2:

Chapter 2:

I am so worried about Alex and David especially now that they have been separated. That Frank is very, very creepy. I hope that when John finally rescues them he catches Frank hurting Alex and beats the crap out of him. He will definitely have to divorce that jerk Chris and then he can remarry Alex.

Great suspense going on too... I love it... update soon.... Please.

Thanks so much for emailing me that you updated.

Chris sounds like a b!tch. Hope John dumps him and begs Alex to take him back.

Is the whole police force in on the freaky, lets kidnap people boat?

wow this is a great story! but wheres the dad? can the son get pregnant too? i cant wait till u update

Great start, very scary! I barely noticed any grammar mistakes, and the writing was very good. I'm happy to have found this! XD

I'm going to go read the second chapter now, yay!

Eeeehhh~ I wanna know what happened to Alex! Also, I HATE Chris. Why did John have to cheat? What a bastard. T_T If John saves Alex and David that would make up for it though!!! Gah, please update soon. >_>

Wow, this is a great story! I'm on the edge of my seat, fearful for poor David. And what did they do w/Alex? OMG and the cop at the police station was the same one who seems to be kidnapping everyone! John is never going to find David and Alex.

I look forward to the next update; I'm on pins and needles!