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by MichiXMaru

schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Elsewhere in the library...XD Lyre and Hakane just happened to be at the wrong place during the wrong time. Nice.
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was very amusing in the library! :D but please update the other stories, i need to know what happens! lol... :(
person GellyBelly
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story man. Hope you update again.
I love the angel's innocence... well angels are innocent haha.
person IsLuRa
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I was SO right! The library WASN'T the same again! Cailean and Keir left their mark all over the place...poor Hakane's scarred for life!! Poor thing was so embarrassed. I wonder what Cail would think if he realized just how many people were in the library that day. Here I am blabbering about other characters...well, I love Lyre already! When Zarz wants something, you better GET it. Shoot.
person Marina
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just what is so special about that ceremonial knife? I'm glad I read everything else before starting on this one, or I wouldn't have recognized Zarzimadden as he is. But, why does he want the knife?? And, holy smokes! Keir and Cailean...I should have known they'd be heard by someone in the Archives. I didn't know whether to blush as bad as Hakane or roll around on the ground laughing.