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by myth

schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a powerful chapter. I guess I wasn't thinking that Yuuto was in love w/Daisuke, as much as he was feeling rejected b/c Daisuke found other people to be around. I guess I was just thinking Yuuto was so lonely not having Daisuke hanging out w/him all the time. I wasn't thinking he was in love w/him.

Thank God Moriyama took him to the hospital; he really needed to be checked out! And I gotta say: ok, I know his mom works A TON OF HOURS, but come on....your son is home sick (she only has ONE child!!!!), he's been home "sick" for a few days and you don't even turn on the friggen' lights in his room to check on him; to see if he's eating anything....I mean, omg, I have 3 kids and you better believe, I would KNOW if something was wrong w/them other than being "sick"! I know she's always at work, but come on, you know your own child, check up on him for Christ's sakes! I'm sorry, I do fault his mom for not realizing something very wrong was going on. How oblivious can you possibly be?????

Ok, sorry, I had to get that out! I am glad sensei was able to get Yuuto to talk and I'm glad he'll be back at school. Altho I don't think he'll come clean to Daisuke about his so called "friends" and his feelings for him.
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yuu-chan! How could Yoshimura and the others do this?
But he was fairly stupid for wanting to be cool so badly ...
I hope he's going to be alright! Update soon! :)
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor Yuuto! =´(
that's a really painful and harsh way of losing his innocence... but really, he should've known better than to mess with that crowd.
just wait till Daisuke founds out, the guys will be in a world of pain (and well deserved at that)
update soon
person Lala
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, the "Korean" ww, actually whenever Daisuke is mentioned in the story, I have this person in mind. And I wanna add you in LJ but we don't really have any common interests other than this story~ DX

NOOO YUUCHAN!!! T_T

I hope he didn't get any disgusting STDs... Daisuke should make them pay. Yes... pay.
person Enamoril
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had such a sad feeling that Yuuto was going to be raped... T_T Poor, poor Yuuto. *wants to hug him*
person cimke
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Powerful scene between Yuuto and Daisuke! Love it!

Awww, Dai-chan is in denial me thinks ;p Really love how attentive and worrying he is with Yuuto. If he only knew why Yuu-chan is acting so "weird"! Oi, oi, oi, can't wait to read more!!!! Looking forward to reading about sensei seein Yuuto and maybe finding out what happened.

I'd very much appreciate your updating soon! Even sooner!
person kylee123
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cam to read and I see that bad things have happened. Now I am afraid to read and find out what bad things have happened.
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Myth - thank you so much for the compliment! No, you are not writing the characters predictably; I'd like to think that I do understand them and what makes them tick. I do appreciate your compliment! I really LOVE, LOVE this story and ALL the characters (ok, I lied, not those fucktards from the city), but all the others! Ok, not Midori, but all the others! lol

So, Yuuto's hiding out, too ashamed to show his face? Is he feeling like this is all his fault? It's not; it's those dirtbags who took advantage of him. I know they "took advantage" to Daisuke, that's putting it very loosely. But Daisuke is completely different than little innocent Yuuto. They should have known better.

I hope that in time Yuuto can tell Daisuke what happened. Unless of course those scumbags brag to him, like I think I said in my last review. Then Daisuke will go over there and they'll wish they never heard the name Hasabe Daisuke! (did I spell that right?)

Anyway, I just feel so bad for poor Yuuto. He didn't ask for any of this. He just wants to fit in; Daisuke fits in everywhere; everyone loves him; he's accepted everywhere and Yuuto justs wants to feel wanted.

He doesn't even realize that Daisuke would be lost w/o him; he's Daisuke's best friend and Daisuke would be devastated w/o Yuuto's friendship.
person Amber
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Why...WHY!
Hurry and write another chapter before I tie you up and bury you with tear-drenched tissue paper!!
...err...I really wouldn't do that...but pleeeease send in another chapter. Very nice story, I'm hooked=D
person Lala
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O~! Casting! LOLOLOL RAIN XDDD

Hmmm... now everyone starts to notice Yuuchan. I had to laugh when Daisuke asked why his hair was soft but I can't help but feel bad for him. Dammit Daisuke~ :{

I hope he doesn't end with the boss or someone evil D;