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by myth

person Lala
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O~! I'm shocked that Yuuto confessed everything so easily. Daisuke needs time to think of his feelings but don't take too long dammit! REalize that you love Yuuchan as well, quick! DX

And finally, sensei realizes that it is a good time to distance from Daisuke. He knows what will happen anyway... I think.

schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
From what I've been reading so far, I completely ADORE this story! This would have made an excellent Yaoi manga and it's something I would definately pick up. Love the characters, their personalities and everything else. Very awesome work :D
person Lala
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that sensei was kind enough to bring Yuuchan to the hospital. I hope that everything goes uphill from here.

And damn, now Yuuto is enlightened. I wonder how he will act around Daisuke.
person cimke
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:-O Yuuto confessed!!!!!! And so quietly and touching *__* Such an intersting turn of events. Let's see how Daisuke will go on .....
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow I gotta say I am surprised Yuu-chan came out and confessed to Daisuke so quickly! and then, in obvious Daisuke fashion, Dai-kun had to run away and insist in keeping is head in the sand about his own feelings, dumb Daisuke!
I had to laugh when I read the last sentences... sensei has a V.I.P seat in watching this teen melodrama but his main concern is bailing his own ass out of the illicit, not to mention potentially dangerous jail wise, affair he got himself caught in. I gotta say he's quite the cunning character, he keeps saying things like 'no, we can't do this, I'm your teacher, you'r a minor' but he keeps fucking Daisuke any chance he gets!
oh well... let's see what happens next, it's bound to be interesting, I'm certain of it! ^^
update soon! (and I wanna read more Wild Pitch! update! update! update! ;P)
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, sensei is pretty astute when it comes to Yuuto's feelings for Daisuke. But wow, I'm actually surprised he's so ok w/Yuuto confessing to Daisuke. Even tho he pushed Yuuto to confess. I know he wants Yuuto and Daisuke to be happy, but is he just trying to get out of his relationship w/Daisuke? Doesn't he have any feelings for Daisuke? I mean, I KNOW I'd be head over heals for him by that time! I don't know, I guess girls just get way more emotional than guys, right? I wouldn't be able to let Daisuke go so easily.

And yeah, to your comment, I could see Daisuke's mom storming into his room to find out what the heck was going on (even tho she's scared to death of her husband), she could be strong in front of the kids. But even if you don't have that dominant personality, (I certainly don't), a mother should not just leave the kid alone after so many hours locked in his room. Yes, I believe in giving your kids the space they need, but when do you butt in? (or is it but in?) Anyway, you get my drift.

Ok, back to the chapter: I'm sure both Daisuke and Yuuto will feel weird w/each other; I hope they don't try to avoid one another; that will just make it worse.
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have fallen in love with this story and have been keeping up with all the chs. Of course some of them I read together because I don't get on every day. Yesterday I read Ch 32 and was so upset I couldn't bring myself to write a review right away so this review is for that ch and 33. You did a great job with the sensitive topic and definitely drew a lot of emotions from me which I must say after reading some pretty horrific things on here I thought I wasn't shockable anymore. I think that just speaks to your great writing skills because you made the reader empathize with the character. Yuu-chan should never have gone there. he is not in the same league as Daisuke and he was naive to think he could be just with a new coiffure. She was a bitch and I hope she gets what's coming to her. Daisuke has been a terrible friend recently neglecting Yuu-chan in favor of his current fling. Yoshimura acted in character and it was admirable that as an author you didn't try and soften the harsh reality but carried out the indelible task of staying true to his scheming self-serving, vindictive character. I hardly slept thinking about Yuu-chan being introduced to sex by being gang raped and betrayed.This new ch was definitely better in that there wasn't much of Yuu-chan and it focused more on Daisuke and his mom. It allowed me to forget for a bit about what happened to Yuuto. I am glad to see Daisuke is waking up a bit from his selfish phase. Yuuto's mom not recognizing something being off with her son though really says something about the amount of time they spend together. Overall a great job and I look forward to reading more. Thanks for not being more explicit.
person Lala
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No problem, I'm not really ASDFGFHGH over him. yt mom used to like him and played his CDs in the car before. I was thinking of a vocalist from a certain band... vk band ww

Yes! New chapter! Thank God you didn't specify the details. That would have been brutal...

LOL, Yuuchan going hiki. I wonder if he will snap at sensei once he visits. I wonder if sensei will find out the truth about what happened. I wonder if Daisuke will know what happened soon.

btw, I've been noticing the increased frequency of updates. I'm loving it 8D
person cimke
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, good thing sensei went to see Yuuto and used all his teacher authority air to make Yuuto talk. Poor boy needed someone to tell about these horrors!!!! Sniff, poor Yuu-chan!

Interesting revelations at the diner table ....... Curious to read more!
person Enamoril
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*can see how Daisuke is going to make Yuuto's rape a bigger deal than either Sensei or Yuuto* o.o *looking forward to his explosion and possible desperate attempt at correcting how screwed up this is going to make Yuuto*

*anticipation*
*whine*

Ohhhh! And just when Yuuto was warming up I have to waaaait....~ Nyaaaaaaa.

I blame you for making me an addict to your story and an avid Yuuto watcher.